The Shaken

[Smirnoff]

3. You will die if you try to leave as the parasite will shut down your major organs if the leader commands it.

That doesn't even make sense. How can the Leader command a parasite to kill you, and it's not a disease if it's a parasite, and how does leaving the zone kill you.

There are disease's with parasites inside your body. But yes, the leader commanding it to be done is a bit strange, would be more realistic, if say, a sort of computer chip? Something like that. Fix the problems and it will be a really good faction if its RP'd correctly.

[Dark Angel]

-Support

[[INVICTUS]]

Taylor, I think you, Airborne, and whoever else is leading the group should talk together to change the Disease's Pros and Cons, and a how you accept people and discipline people once their in it.

[Romka]

-Support This all confusing and wierd, not to mention kills a bit of canon, I DUN LIEK IT!

[Joemoma]

There's a NEW VERSION >_< i asked an admin to lock this thread, and i requested ppl to NOT post, FFS, do you guys read?

[Paintcheck]

Lock'd