[Accepted] The Rebellious Ones

[Nines]

Atleast Plunger is offering some useful comments, these other guys are just like "blah blah, I don't like it".
If you're not going to help, then don't post.

[Nines]

"Quick footsteps pounded on the soft wet dirt, sprinkled by the the rain, tinted to an almost bluish color, and tainted by the misery and hatred of the faction chief nearby. More footsteps are heard after the first pair, these heavier, angrier, ready to destroy this "liberator of the peoples". Stolen from the faction for the greater good of the people, were all the whips used for torture, along with the collars, but he did leave one thing, a simple note for the leader, it simply stated "Thy people rise over thy predator".

The man who did this courageous act for the people is part of the Rebellious Few, they are the outlawed Do-gooders. Giving to the poor and protecting them from any who wish them harm, be it the Baron, or the necromancers.

It's a WIP, but it's not bad in my opinion.

[Sheperd]

Thanks, Ill use it.

[Welshy]

Steam Freinds name:Ganendor

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472


What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Either Swordsman or archer which ever u need more

IC Name?:Robert Jones

Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a hooligan in his younger years. He caused havok with the shopkeepers and the local guards but everyone still loved him. After a while he began to mature and see the error of his ways, but as he grew maturaty was not the only thing that changed him. He saw how the people were treated and how the people who caused their suffering to walked away without even a warning. He began to stand up for these people untill he became one of them who was suffering. Untill he saw the light of the rebellious ones judge those who the guards would not. He wishes to become one to protect those who cant protect themselves. ( thru words if possible not swords, i know i give that impression but i cant put it in without it looking stupid)

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect those who cannot protect themselves

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:To Aid those who need aiding and to protect all i care for and who do not recive any care

What does your position require?:Cunning Agility Dexterity/ Strength Bravery Honor (depending on what u want me as)

Extra Comment: Does not use violence unless it is required.

Just to clarify i aint trying to be a minge or a DMer its just the way my backstory is.

[Sheperd]

Steam Freinds name:Ganendor

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472


What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Either Swordsman or archer which ever u need more

IC Name?:Robert Jones

Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a hooligan in his younger years. He caused havok with the shopkeepers and the local guards but everyone still loved him. After a while he began to mature and see the error of his ways, but as he grew maturaty was not the only thing that changed him. He saw how the people were treated and how the people who caused their suffering to walked away without even a warning. He began to stand up for these people untill he became one of them who was suffering. Untill he saw the light of the rebellious ones judge those who the guards would not. He wishes to become one to protect those who cant protect themselves. ( thru words if possible not swords, i know i give that impression but i cant put it in without it looking stupid)

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect those who cannot protect themselves

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:To Aid those who need aiding and to protect all i care for and who do not recive any care

What does your position require?:Cunning Agility Dexterity/ Strength Bravery Honor (depending on what u want me as)

Extra Comment: Does not use violence unless it is required.

Just to clarify i aint trying to be a minge or a DMer its just the way my backstory is.

Denied, Sorry but you need to work on the backstory just a bit, and work on your grammer. Apply back in 1 Week if you wish. (The apps might be closed)

[Welshy]

Steam Freinds name: Ganendor

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer

IC Name?:Robert Llewellyn

Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a quiet young boy, he never had a social life untill his father took him out hunting for the first time. He taught Robert how too shoot a bow, how to stalk wildlife and how to process them to finish. After that first experiance of hunting he became obessed with it, he would hunt every day and sell the meat at the local market. By hunting he grew more of a social life with others in the community and he became an excellent marksman. As he grew up however he saw the changes within his village and the grasp of corruption taking hold within it. This disgusted him untill it got to the point where he has a pure hatred for all who was corrupt. One day, many years later, he saw there was a gathering of people in the street, being a curious he went to inspect what has happened. He saw that the greediest and most corrupt villager lay dead on the floor and of these rebels with his blade soaked in the mans blood. After questioning local people about the incident he discovered the reason behind the mans death, and he felt that becoming one of these rebels would help rid this land of it corruption.

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To stand against those who are corrupt and evil.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: To help those who suffer from the corruption within the land.

What does your position require?: Dexterity, Agility, Cunning, A sharp eye and calm nerves.

[Sheperd]

Accepted, You made improvments on your grammer and your backstory.

[Deathcon]

Alright this group looks like it is coming along nicely but before it gets accepted it needs more Backstory, better applications, more extensive explanation of the jobs(Like the Archer is good with bows but will be taken down easily by someone with a sword, and more explanation of there exact role.) Clean up the roster a little bit and refine the ranks a little.

Final Verdict Still Pending

[Sheperd]

will do deathcon

[Deathcon]

ACCEPTED

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