Backstory: "Quick footsteps pounded on the soft wet dirt, sprinkled by the the rain, tinted to an almost bluish color, and tainted by the misery and hatred of the faction chief nearby. More footsteps are heard after the first pair, these heavier, angrier, ready to destroy this "liberator of the peoples". Stolen from the faction for the greater good of the people, were all the whips used for torture, along with the collars, but he did leave one thing, a simple note for the leader, it simply stated "Thy people rise over thy predator". The man who did this courageous act for the people is part of the Rebellious Ones, they are the outlawed Do-gooders. Giving to the poor and protecting them from any who wish them harm, be it the Baron, or the necromancers. But work reached the castle. And the duke wanted him finnished and the items they stole returned. Now, I take you back to the group of the ones who did this Couragous group. The Rebellious Ones. They're setting up camp after recently being raided by bounty hunters and knights. But most if not all made it out alive. Many men are gathering wood, and some making weapons. Shouts of men and crackling and people jumping out of the bushes. Many men starts screeming "Ambush!"
But it was too late; half his men were all ready taken captive, the rest surrendered. The bounty hunters called in a caravan and started loading the outlaws and bandits on it. A while down the road the bounty hunters were sleeping and everyone but the driver was dead asleep. Aidan realizes that one of his cuffs has come loose. He quickly wakes up one of his comrades and tells him that one of his cuffs is loose. He quickly finds a somewhat sharp stone and starts to work his way out of his other cuff. It breaks loose and his crawls toward the lead guard and searches his pocket and finds the keys. The guard snorts and briefly wakes up. Aidan quickly makes it look as if his still locked up. The guard falls back into another deep sleep. He tells the man he woke up before to wake up the others and hands him the keys to the cuffs.
Aidan says silently "Hey, wake up the others and unlock your self. We are getting out of here."
The man wakes everyone up and hands the keys around. He grabs some of the weapons that are in a bundle to the side and quickly hops out silently so the guard will not hear. The rest follow him as silent as a mouse, they run off into the darkness of the forest. They wait for the caravan to stroll off and come out of hiding; they talk in the silence of night.
Aidan says "Ok, well I am taking a stand. For all us! We need to take a stand to the people who tear down houses and ruin lives! We need to protect the innocent! From these monsters! These bringers of mayhem and destruction! We need to fight! For the ones who cant fight! And if we lose! At least we tried!" All the men burst into cheering.
Aidan goes on. "So I take this as a vow, a vow to protect the innocent. And fight against these people. Put your hands in here." They all put their hands in. "Ok, now. What do we want to be known as by the public?" Some people suggested "How about the Friendly Outlaws!" "What about The Forest Dwellers?" "Here. How do you feel about The Rebellious Ones?" They all nod and say "Yeah sounds good." "I like it." Aidan continues. "So there it is, The Rebellious Ones."
Rules:
1. You do not recruit anyone into the group without permission from the leader
2. Be respectfull to any and all players.
3. Always respect the leader.
4. Listen to the people higher rank than you.
5. Use no harfull launguage towards others.
Jobs:
The Archer: This person specializes in Long bows and Crossbows. He is for the most part accurate with Bows, and Trains in Bows and small Knifes and things. Effective against melee at long range. But at close range, they might as well already be dead.
The Scout: This person is known as the "Stealth" Part of the Rebellious Ones. These people roam the forest looking for people in peril. He finds them and comes back to the group. He is weak to everything enless highley trained in what they are holding. These men are very fast and agile.
The Swordsman: These men are more armored and use's more heavy swords and blades. These men are trained well and hard. These men are taken down easily by archers from long range. At close range to archers, the archer has little to no chance to live
Roster
Leader: Aidan:[HGN] Sheperd
Scout's Leader:
Elite Scout:
Experianced Scout:
Scouts: Hhaanz Valanus:B0mbH3ad, Hetzler Siem:Mr. So and so,
Swordsman's Leader: Edmund Wake:[HGN] Nines
Elite Swordsman:
Experianced Swordsman:
Swordsman: Baldor Vawdrey:[HGN] Zstan
Archer's Leader: Alexander Kreen|The chosen one
Elite Archer:
Experianced Archer:
Archer:William Tell:[R|L]Sniperhunter, Robert Llewellyn|Ganendor
Ranks:
Leader
Scout's Leader
Elite Scout
Experianced Scout
Scout
Swordsman's Leader
Experianced Swordsman
Swordsman
Archer's Leader
Elite Archer
Experianced Archer
Archer
Applications: OPEN
If you wish to apply use this format. (We do accept In game applications just a little harder to get.)
Steam Freinds name:
Steam ID:
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?:
In Character Name?:
Write a Backstory on your applicant:
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for? (Use detail please):
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones? (Use detail please):
What does your position require?:
I have Nines, and Zaki's Support
Judas Dislike's
I feel like this has been made before, and BTW the names Outlaws/Bandits sound to western plz change them
Sounds great, shep.
Keep up the great work.
Steam Friends:B0mbH3ad
SteamID:# 15 "B0mbH3ad" STEAM_0:1:15767366 01:12 118 4 active
IC Name: Hhaanz Valanus
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?:I will probably be a scout, because I am skilled in stealth. (Play a lot of stealth games)
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?:
Protecting the innocent from the scum of this world, so they can live peaceful lives.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:Because I want to have fun roleplaying with friends, and helping other people.
What does your position require?:Being a shadow of the night, while still helping other people.
Accepted, Ill watch how you role-play and what not.
Steam Friends name: ๖ۣۜMя. ?ǿ άйđ şǿ
Steam ID: 11061154
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: I am applying for Scout.
IC Name: Hetzler Siem
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect innocent from criminals, so that they can live safe in their life.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I feel it is my duty to help those who can not help themselves in situations of terror. It will also be a cool RP.
What does your position require?: Stealth, speed, agility. The ability to get around fast and always have a way out.
Steam Freinds name: Connor
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:19028755
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer
IC Name: Crescent
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect the People.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: Well, I usally RP (MISTER EVIL) So i think it would be good to try out helping people for once instead of stepping on there necks and Shooting them in the head.
What does your position require?: Speed, Agility , Accuracy.
Accepted Mr. So and so, I know you can rp and I look forward to rping with you in the future
Dislike this Idea. Dislike current application procedures. I Do not support.
Steam Freinds name: Nines
Steam ID: 12520311
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Swordsman
IC Name: Edmund Wake
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: Ones who stand for honor and courage, protecting the weak from the ones who prey on them.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I miss my rebellious characters from other RP servers, i'd like to have one again. I found it quite rewarding both ICly and OOCly.
What does your position require?: To be the heavily armed ones of the lot, this position requires a person of immense courage and a good heart for the people.(I felt weird typing that)
Accepted, Nines. You are a exelent rper and you are a very trusted member. I know you can rp very well and for that I am giving you Swordsman Leader.
Steam Friends name: The Chosen One
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:9714425 00:43 96
What position are you applying for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer
IC Name: Alexander Kreen
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: The Rebellious Ones stand to protect the innocent.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I want to join The Rebellious Ones to help protect the innocent people from the criminals, and I want to join because it would be a great Role Play experience to join and to help the innocent.
What does your position require?: Steady aim, Accuracy, Patience
Accepted, Ive roleplayed with you before and I know you wont dissapoint me.
Steam Freinds name: [R|L]Sniperhunter
Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:7700494
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer
IC Name: William Tell
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: They protect the innocents from danger
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: My character has a rebellious backstory, due to a certain event. Also, I love to work in a group. It gets way more work done faster.
What does your position require?: Good eyesight, marksmanship, and concretration
Accepted, not the greatest app, Ill watch how you role play and handle situations.
Steam Freinds name: [HGN] Zstan
Steam ID: ill get it
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Swordsman
IC Name: Baldor Vawdrey
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: we protect people from danger from bandits the duke and the baron
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I like to roleplay as a outlaw / Robin hood type character.. Seems like my type of faction so I thought i would give it a try
What does your position require?: To be strong, Have courage, and have a big sword
Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Baldor came from a distant landed named Olden. He was once a high ranking member in the White hand and was cast out for unknown reasons.The White Hand a extremely skilled assassin group that was started by one of Baldor's freinds.Baldor then made his long and tiring journey to Crussaria he found a couple of artifacts on his journey. He doesnt really know what they do but hes selling them to help his cause in the land he found called Crussaria.
Accepted, Ill be watching you though.
I don't like it :/
Oh god, your writing style is hideous. You go from 1st to 3rd to 100th Person point of view, using old style speech, with an occasional new slang thrown in. I see this as a minge group in the future.
You mean it isn't a minge group already, He hasn't even denied one person yet.
Because I know all these people for being good roleplayers.
Still, Their application are terrible, there should be a back story to define their characters play style.
Good point. I like constrictive critisicm. I think Ill add it.Thanks plunger :)
I recommend having them do at least a paragraph (Three to five sentences.). Also don't be afraid to put some applications on pending until you can see how they handle themselves as just a peasant.
Noted
Atleast Plunger is offering some useful comments, these other guys are just like "blah blah, I don't like it".
If you're not going to help, then don't post.
"Quick footsteps pounded on the soft wet dirt, sprinkled by the the rain, tinted to an almost bluish color, and tainted by the misery and hatred of the faction chief nearby. More footsteps are heard after the first pair, these heavier, angrier, ready to destroy this "liberator of the peoples". Stolen from the faction for the greater good of the people, were all the whips used for torture, along with the collars, but he did leave one thing, a simple note for the leader, it simply stated "Thy people rise over thy predator".
The man who did this courageous act for the people is part of the Rebellious Few, they are the outlawed Do-gooders. Giving to the poor and protecting them from any who wish them harm, be it the Baron, or the necromancers.
It's a WIP, but it's not bad in my opinion.
Thanks, Ill use it.
Steam Freinds name:Ganendor
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Either Swordsman or archer which ever u need more
IC Name?:Robert Jones
Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a hooligan in his younger years. He caused havok with the shopkeepers and the local guards but everyone still loved him. After a while he began to mature and see the error of his ways, but as he grew maturaty was not the only thing that changed him. He saw how the people were treated and how the people who caused their suffering to walked away without even a warning. He began to stand up for these people untill he became one of them who was suffering. Untill he saw the light of the rebellious ones judge those who the guards would not. He wishes to become one to protect those who cant protect themselves. ( thru words if possible not swords, i know i give that impression but i cant put it in without it looking stupid)
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect those who cannot protect themselves
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:To Aid those who need aiding and to protect all i care for and who do not recive any care
What does your position require?:Cunning Agility Dexterity/ Strength Bravery Honor (depending on what u want me as)
Extra Comment: Does not use violence unless it is required.
Just to clarify i aint trying to be a minge or a DMer its just the way my backstory is.
Quote from: ganendor Steam Freinds name:Ganendor
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Either Swordsman or archer which ever u need more
IC Name?:Robert Jones
Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a hooligan in his younger years. He caused havok with the shopkeepers and the local guards but everyone still loved him. After a while he began to mature and see the error of his ways, but as he grew maturaty was not the only thing that changed him. He saw how the people were treated and how the people who caused their suffering to walked away without even a warning. He began to stand up for these people untill he became one of them who was suffering. Untill he saw the light of the rebellious ones judge those who the guards would not. He wishes to become one to protect those who cant protect themselves. ( thru words if possible not swords, i know i give that impression but i cant put it in without it looking stupid)
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect those who cannot protect themselves
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:To Aid those who need aiding and to protect all i care for and who do not recive any care
What does your position require?:Cunning Agility Dexterity/ Strength Bravery Honor (depending on what u want me as)
Extra Comment: Does not use violence unless it is required.
Just to clarify i aint trying to be a minge or a DMer its just the way my backstory is.
Denied, Sorry but you need to work on the backstory just a bit, and work on your grammer. Apply back in 1 Week if you wish. (The apps might be closed)
Steam Freinds name: Ganendor
Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:2793472
What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer
IC Name?:Robert Llewellyn
Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Robert was a quiet young boy, he never had a social life untill his father took him out hunting for the first time. He taught Robert how too shoot a bow, how to stalk wildlife and how to process them to finish. After that first experiance of hunting he became obessed with it, he would hunt every day and sell the meat at the local market. By hunting he grew more of a social life with others in the community and he became an excellent marksman. As he grew up however he saw the changes within his village and the grasp of corruption taking hold within it. This disgusted him untill it got to the point where he has a pure hatred for all who was corrupt. One day, many years later, he saw there was a gathering of people in the street, being a curious he went to inspect what has happened. He saw that the greediest and most corrupt villager lay dead on the floor and of these rebels with his blade soaked in the mans blood. After questioning local people about the incident he discovered the reason behind the mans death, and he felt that becoming one of these rebels would help rid this land of it corruption.
What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To stand against those who are corrupt and evil.
Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: To help those who suffer from the corruption within the land.
What does your position require?: Dexterity, Agility, Cunning, A sharp eye and calm nerves.
Accepted, You made improvments on your grammer and your backstory.
Alright this group looks like it is coming along nicely but before it gets accepted it needs more Backstory, better applications, more extensive explanation of the jobs(Like the Archer is good with bows but will be taken down easily by someone with a sword, and more explanation of there exact role.) Clean up the roster a little bit and refine the ranks a little.
Final Verdict Still Pending
will do deathcon