Desertian Crisis

Started by Jones815, 24-04-2010

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Jones815

This is pretty much my first comic. I tried to write stories in the past but I learned that I never finished the series back then. I wanted to experiment and see how this turns out. Oh crap I just found a typo in one of the scenes. On the sentence "I deal with it." it should be "I'll deal with it.". Minor error. Sorry :/

So yeah other than the minor errors I just caught, let me know what you think.

World in Conflict Soundtrack - Final Fight














franco20

You actually simulated this in-game, almost exactly how the comic goes.  It was pretty cool except CE gets all the RP out of it.
FALLOUT - Pvt. Beverley Louis: Tough-acting grunt in the service of New Haven.

Jones815

Well this comic doesn't take place in Gerian. It's actually another town, and another unit. I should have mentioned that in the disclaimer :/

OjManchow

Very good, but im sure you meant that the Civvies were expendable instead of expandable ^_^