This is pretty much my first comic. I tried to write stories in the past but I learned that I never finished the series back then. I wanted to experiment and see how this turns out. Oh crap I just found a typo in one of the scenes. On the sentence "I deal with it." it should be "I'll deal with it.". Minor error. Sorry :/
So yeah other than the minor errors I just caught, let me know what you think.
World in Conflict Soundtrack - Final Fight (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gi_PA9d1K-g#lq-lq2-hq-vhq)
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You actually simulated this in-game, almost exactly how the comic goes. It was pretty cool except CE gets all the RP out of it.
Well this comic doesn't take place in Gerian. It's actually another town, and another unit. I should have mentioned that in the disclaimer :/
Very good, but im sure you meant that the Civvies were expendable instead of expandable ^_^