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geccoy · **on:** 10-05-2012

A place where I hope I can get some constructive criticism.
I don't do colours, since, I have no coloured pencils/ink, so I am limited to graphite. However, I find that it is usually sufficient in making a pretty thing.

A piece I am working on now is what I have begun to call, "Depression". Please ignore the fact the quality is shit. At the moment, I am debating hair styles for the girl.

Depression

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Shadow-blade

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Talk of Trees

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Chell Sellitus

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Zen · **Reply #1 on:** 11-05-2012

Why are they all so, depressing? All of them could have amounted to something yet you decided it would be a good idea to add something SILLY too them or give them retarded names.

Lets take the first one, Depression.
Why do you need to name it something so; Unoriginal & Stupid. If your feeling depressed go sort it out, the female face is done fine; Dont need any other bullshit in there, just work on the face and then add a body or something. Go buy some colouring pencils or artists brushes/paint.

Shadow-Blade,
This is the one I am most disapointed with, if you hadent have put that god awful black shit spewing from his wrist and just kept and worked on the hand it would have been a masterpiece, again buy some colouring pencils or some shit.

Talk of Trees,
Nice tree shape, needs some foilage (THE GREEN STUFF OR OTHER COLOURED STUFF DEPENDING ON SEASON ONTOP.) To make it less depressing and silly. REFER TO BOLDED LETTERING ABOVE.

geccoy · **Reply #2 on:** 11-05-2012

Quote from: Zen on 11-05-2012

Why are they all so, depressing? All of them could have amounted to something yet you decided it would be a good idea to add something SILLY too them or give them retarded names.

Lets take the first one, Depression.
Why do you need to name it something so; Unoriginal & Stupid. If your feeling depressed go sort it out, the female face is done fine; Dont need any other bullshit in there, just work on the face and then add a body or something. Go buy some colouring pencils or artists brushes/paint.

Shadow-Blade,
This is the one I am most disapointed with, if you hadent have put that god awful black shit spewing from his wrist and just kept and worked on the hand it would have been a masterpiece, again buy some colouring pencils or some shit.

Talk of Trees,
Nice tree shape, needs some foilage (THE GREEN STUFF OR OTHER COLOURED STUFF DEPENDING ON SEASON ONTOP.) To make it less depressing and silly. REFER TO BOLDED LETTERING ABOVE.

Thanks for your input! I'll be sure to work on all the flaws you pointed out. I'm out to buy coloured pencils later.

geccoy · **Reply #3 on:** 18-05-2012

Added a girl. The chin I just changed, aswell as the band across her eye. However, my webcam is being weird and won't let me take pictures. I'll update it when I can. It's one of the first time I've actually seriously done something in coloured pencil. I usually suck at it.