The Shaken

[Joemoma]

We have a website: http://theshaken.weebly.com/ Go there if you want to see our current edits, and could an admin please lock this thread plox?

[Zstan]

So you've been around for 200 years, the time zone for SRP has only been around for about 10-20 years..Also MONOLITH

No support.

[Joemoma]

So you've been around for 200 years, the time zone for SRP has only been around for about 10-20 years..Also MONOLITH

No support.

I fixed that, needed more detail on it, it began outside the zone, but as a place where The Shaken can take root and not be pushed back into hiding they found "The Zone" and quickly took root, god you guys are fast on the reply :P, and think a bit more, doesn't have to be zone-created to be in the zone :D, if that was true, why the hell are we here? we weren't created here.

Second of all, we do not brainwash, we are friendly toward everyone who deserves it.

[Paintcheck]

NO there's already too much supernatural shit going on (vampiric players, players that are rabid, etc). The Zone is not some mythical haven for leprechauns and dragons and the Easter Bunny. Yes there are mutants but this is pushing it.

That and you have like 30 ranks. For me to even THINK about POSSIBLY maybe giving a NEUTRAL outlook you'd need to make a back story that doesn't look like it took 10 minutes.

[Welek]

NO

There are no illnesses that would ever make you into a mutant, I'm tired of all this half mutant character bullshit.

[Strelok Holmes]

NO

There are no illnesses that would ever make you into a mutant, I'm tired of all this half mutant character bullshit.

Welek for once has hit the nail on the head. You do NOT turn into a mutant. The zone has been around for FIVE years, five. Why do i say that? Because it was created in 2006 and the timeline we're in is 2011.

[Welek]

Welek for once has hit the nail on the head. You do NOT turn into a mutant. The zone has been around for FIVE years, five. Why do i say that? Because it was created in 2006 and the timeline we're in is 2011.

Why thank you Strelok. :3

[Assassinator]

Guys, you should be nicer. It's a newer player contributing, what have you done in the past month?

[Joemoma]

* Joemoma facepalms

WHEN DID I SAY WE WERE MUTANTS? we have a disease which has been around for 200 years but has lived in the shadows until now >:| read the damn back story completely! it only makes us weaker if anything, we cough blood, spit... disgusting stuff from our throats, the only one even slightly helped by this is our leader who has a mutation of the virus, this shit's thought out, you guys just can't take it all in. Thank you assasinator.

AGAIN: The only true "Mutant" form is the Necrophel, which is unreachable as the only one has died. We follow his teachings, maybe one day, in a long time, our leader will reach that form, but it will take a very, very long time. Ask questions, don't be an ass.

(willy wonka quote)
And Good DAY to you SIR!

[Joemoma]

NO there's already too much supernatural shit going on (vampiric players, players that are rabid, etc). The Zone is not some mythical haven for leprechauns and dragons and the Easter Bunny. Yes there are mutants but this is pushing it.

That and you have like 30 ranks. For me to even THINK about POSSIBLY maybe giving a NEUTRAL outlook you'd need to make a back story that doesn't look like it took 10 minutes.

For fuck sake, we have 10 ranks, the military has the same amount if not MORE, and we have a disease, and we WILL have a longer, more in-depth backstory later today, but our leader is not on, so he can't write a longer one, just keep checking back. i really must say though, your a pessimist, look at all the good stuff inside the group, let me LIST the good things about it.

1. Many ranks
2. In-Depth roleplay will be created
3. It's original
4. it's not mono, like you guys think, no brainwash, you join on your own detail
5. the back story is going to be lengthened today
6. It includes the outer areas of "The Zone" into roleplay

Bad things:

1. back sto- oh wait it's going to be re-written later... so N/A
2. N/A
3. N/A
4. N/A
5. N/A
6. N/A

So what's the score...
Good: 6
Bad: 1
I think this is a good idea if you ask me...

[Joemoma]

oh and all the "NO!"s i've seen are un-constructive and have no real reason other than to flame, re-do your answers, and be more, oh, i don't know, constructive?

And Welek your arguements are in the "Fail" class as they have nothing conclusive supporting your no's other than obvious things that will be fixed, you have lost this arguement Welek, good day, don't let the page hit you on the ass on the way out

[Szenti]

Why are you triple posting? And the ranks are really like... A Monolith wannabe group...

[Celtic]

I like that triple post.

I think this is a good idea if you ask me...

I hope you think it's a good idea, the last thing people want are your bad ideas.

It seems to me you're some sort of crazy cult?  Regarding the disease, how was it kept under the wraps for 200 years?  Overall the whole idea seems a tad confusing.  Also are you only allowed to pick one of those classes?  I believe it's much better for RP when you allow people to choose a specialization of their own.

[Joemoma]

I've never even seen the monolith list X| and i triple posted cuz they all press on a different issue, and i slimmed the ranks down to 9, only 6 are attainable unless you are hand-picked. And yes, you choose your class, the disease was kept "Under Wraps" because we stayed in areas where no one went, and if they did, they went "missing" if they uncovered us. Most of the important stuff was just edited into the backstory. And yeah, we're a cult in simple form.

[OrangeReal]

NO!!

-Support

Tell me how this will support STALKER RP And I will change my answer.

[Joemoma]

This will support SRP by increasing the versatility of groups you can join and will allow other groups someone who can help them with military endeavors, say freedom needs 5 more men, and we have them, they can buy them (cheap) until the attack is over. We will only help those who we see reasonable to help. We will also allow STALKERs another safe place so if they screwed up in the past, we are safe and will protect STALKERs from anyone and everyone. Anyone who pulls a gun in our base will have 3 more at their own head.

SO: we allow STALKERs a safe place, allow our soldiers to help both sides so RP attackers/defenders can improve their chances by hiring sure-fire ppl to work for them with no chance of lying or deceiving. Finally we allow STALKERs yet another group to join so they have an even larger choice!

[Dragon]

Pardon if my skills of reading are failing, but.

It's very plausable, started by disease, which COULD be right, considering there are probably quite afew diseases that we have not uncovered in real life, or maybe some that we don't know exist, only to be found in future...
Said diseases could have anything in store, this being one of the diseases, causing the effects it comes with...
And from the first infection, other infected contacts have been made, eventually forming this?

Seems all fine and good to me.

[OrangeReal]

So your saying...Its a Merc/Religion/Military Group?

[Joemoma]

Essentially, yes, but mainly Religous, we follow the order of The Shaken. We lend our troops to friends and sell them to the Neutral. We are NOT mercenaries though, we do things for reasons, we don't go looking for missions all day.

[OrangeReal]

+/- Support

We will see how this turn out.

[Joemoma]

Story edited to be a bit better
again our leader was in a rush, we'll have an epic-tale for you guys later

[Zstan]

This will support SRP by increasing the versatility of groups you can join and will allow other groups someone who can help them with military endeavors,

You mean like the other 50 groups?

[Joemoma]

Nope, it's joinable for the first part then we stop recruiting for a while, and we only help when either paid or we want to help, we are a peaceful group ourselves unless we need to be aggressive, or our allies need us.

[Zstan]

Have you like..not read the other faction threads? "Lul we are peaceful  but we will kill you if you are bad, and we will only help if you pay us a ridiculous amount of money"

[Radek]

Lol it feels like msot people that are so negative have just read the first two posts and saw that Paint said no then everyone went with that. I have to agree that the back story is a little shaky but i think there might be something to this if the people in it rp the right way. so +support, but if you guys prove me wrong i'll personaly rip your brains out.