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[Accepted] The Rebellious Ones

Started by Sheperd, 08-01-2009

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Backstory: "Quick footsteps pounded on the soft wet dirt, sprinkled by the the rain, tinted to an almost bluish color, and tainted by the misery and hatred of the faction chief nearby. More footsteps are heard after the first pair, these heavier, angrier, ready to destroy this "liberator of the peoples". Stolen from the faction for the greater good of the people, were all the whips used for torture, along with the collars, but he did leave one thing, a simple note for the leader, it simply stated "Thy people rise over thy predator". The man who did this courageous act for the people is part of the Rebellious Ones, they are the outlawed Do-gooders. Giving to the poor and protecting them from any who wish them harm, be it the Baron, or the necromancers. But work reached the castle. And the duke wanted him finnished and the items they stole returned. Now, I take you back to the group of the ones who did this Couragous group. The Rebellious Ones. They're setting up camp after recently being raided by bounty hunters and knights. But most if not all made it out alive. Many men are gathering wood, and some making weapons. Shouts of men and crackling and people jumping out of the bushes. Many men starts screeming "Ambush!"
   But it was too late; half his men were all ready taken captive, the rest surrendered. The bounty hunters called in a caravan and started loading the outlaws and bandits on it. A while down the road the bounty hunters were sleeping and everyone but the driver was dead asleep. Aidan realizes that one of his cuffs has come loose. He quickly wakes up one of his comrades and tells him that one of his cuffs is loose. He quickly finds a somewhat sharp stone and starts to work his way out of his other cuff. It breaks loose and his crawls toward the lead guard and searches his pocket and finds the keys. The guard snorts and briefly wakes up. Aidan quickly makes it look as if his still locked up. The guard falls back into another deep sleep. He tells the man he woke up before to wake up the others and hands him the keys to the cuffs.
Aidan says silently "Hey, wake up the others and unlock your self. We are getting out of here."
   The man wakes everyone up and hands the keys around. He grabs some of the weapons that are in a bundle to the side and quickly hops out silently so the guard will not hear. The rest follow him as silent as a mouse, they run off into the darkness of the forest. They wait for the caravan to stroll off and come out of hiding; they talk in the silence of night.
Aidan says "Ok, well I am taking a stand. For all us! We need to take a stand to the people who tear down houses and ruin lives! We need to protect the innocent! From these monsters! These bringers of mayhem and destruction! We need to fight! For the ones who cant fight! And if we lose! At least we tried!" All the men burst into cheering.
Aidan goes on. "So I take this as a vow, a vow to protect the innocent. And fight against these people. Put your hands in here." They all put their hands in. "Ok, now. What do we want to be known as by the public?" Some people suggested "How about the Friendly Outlaws!" "What about The Forest Dwellers?" "Here. How do you feel about The Rebellious Ones?" They all nod and say "Yeah sounds good." "I like it." Aidan continues. "So there it is, The Rebellious Ones."

Rules:
1. You do not recruit anyone into the group without permission from the leader
2. Be respectfull to any and all players.
3. Always respect the leader.
4. Listen to the people higher rank than you.
5. Use no harfull launguage towards others.

Jobs:
The Archer: This person specializes in Long bows and Crossbows. He is for the most part accurate with Bows, and Trains in Bows and small Knifes and things. Effective against melee at long range. But at close range, they might as well already be dead.

The Scout: This person is known as the "Stealth" Part of the Rebellious Ones. These people roam the forest looking for people in peril. He finds them and comes back to the group. He is weak to everything enless highley trained in what they are holding. These men are very fast and agile.

The Swordsman: These men are more armored and use's more heavy swords and blades. These men are trained well and hard. These men are taken down easily by archers from long range. At close range to archers, the archer has little to no chance to live
Roster

Leader: Aidan:[HGN] Sheperd

Scout's Leader:

Elite Scout:

Experianced Scout:

Scouts: Hhaanz Valanus:B0mbH3ad, Hetzler Siem:Mr. So and so,

Swordsman's Leader: Edmund Wake:[HGN] Nines

Elite Swordsman:

Experianced Swordsman:

Swordsman: Baldor Vawdrey:[HGN] Zstan

Archer's Leader: Alexander Kreen|The chosen one

Elite Archer:

Experianced Archer:

Archer:William Tell:[R|L]Sniperhunter, Robert Llewellyn|Ganendor

Ranks:
Leader
Scout's Leader
Elite Scout
Experianced Scout
Scout
Swordsman's Leader
Experianced Swordsman
Swordsman
Archer's Leader
Elite Archer
Experianced Archer
Archer

Applications:  OPEN

If you wish to apply use this format. (We do accept In game applications just a little harder to get.)

Steam Freinds name:

Steam ID:

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?:

In Character Name?:

Write a Backstory on your applicant:

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for? (Use detail please):

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones? (Use detail please):

What does your position require?:

I have Nines, and Zaki's Support
Judas Dislike's

I feel like this has been made before, and BTW the names Outlaws/Bandits sound to western plz change them

Sounds great, shep.

Keep up the great work.
Sometimes I wish I was a can of cola.
Sometimes I wish...

Steam Friends:B0mbH3ad

SteamID:# 15 "B0mbH3ad" STEAM_0:1:15767366 01:12 118 4 active

IC Name: Hhaanz Valanus

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?:I will probably be a scout, because I am skilled in stealth. (Play a lot of stealth games)

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?:
Protecting the innocent from the scum of this world, so they can live peaceful lives.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?:Because I want to have fun roleplaying with friends, and helping other people.

What does your position require?:Being a shadow of the night, while still helping other people.
Sometimes I wish I was a can of cola.
Sometimes I wish...

Accepted, Ill watch how you role-play and what not.

Steam Friends name: ๖ۣۜMя. ?ǿ άйđ şǿ

Steam ID:
11061154

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?:
I am applying for Scout.

IC Name: Hetzler Siem

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect innocent from criminals, so that they can live safe in their life.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I feel it is my duty to help those who can not help themselves in situations of terror. It will also be a cool RP.

What does your position require?: Stealth, speed, agility. The ability to get around fast and always have a way out.


I got freaky with the Photoshop and got this...

Steam Freinds name: Connor      

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:19028755

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer

IC Name: Crescent

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: To protect the People.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: Well, I usally RP (MISTER EVIL) So i think it would be good to try out helping people for once instead of stepping on there necks and Shooting them in the head.

What does your position require?: Speed, Agility , Accuracy.
"United We Stand, Divided We Fall"

--------FALLOUT ROLEPLAY--------
Connor Xentos - Enclave Applied - Alive

--------MIDEVIL ROLEPLAY--------
Crescent - Elve Bowman - Alive
Connor Xentos - Human Swordsman - Alive

--------REAL LIFE ROLEPLAY--------
Connor Murphy - Police Applied - Alive

Accepted Mr. So and so, I know you can rp and I look forward to rping with you in the future

Dislike this Idea. Dislike current application procedures. I Do not support.

Steam Freinds name: Nines

Steam ID: 12520311

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Swordsman

IC Name: Edmund Wake

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: Ones who stand for honor and courage, protecting the weak from the ones who prey on them.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I miss my rebellious characters from other RP servers, i'd like to have one again. I found it quite rewarding both ICly and OOCly.

What does your position require?: To be the heavily armed ones of the lot, this position requires a person of immense courage and a good heart for the people.(I felt weird typing that)

Accepted, Nines. You are a exelent rper and you are a very trusted member. I know you can rp very well and for that I am giving you Swordsman Leader.

Steam Friends name: The Chosen One

Steam ID:STEAM_0:1:9714425 00:43 96

What position are you applying for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer

IC Name: Alexander Kreen

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: The Rebellious Ones stand to protect the innocent.

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I want to join The Rebellious Ones to help protect the innocent people from the criminals, and I want to join because it would be a great Role Play experience to join and to help the innocent.

What does your position require?: Steady aim, Accuracy, Patience
STALKER RP Characters
                 
Alive- Mental Stability= 92%- Michael Zutherson-DUTY Applicant

Alive- Mental Stability= 99%- Nikolai Zakhar-Mercenary

Accepted, Ive roleplayed with you before and I know you wont dissapoint me.

Steam Freinds name: [R|L]Sniperhunter

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:7700494

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Archer

IC Name: William Tell

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: They protect the innocents from danger

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: My character has a rebellious backstory, due to a certain event. Also, I love to work in a group. It gets way more work done faster.

What does your position require?: Good eyesight, marksmanship, and concretration

Accepted, not the greatest app, Ill watch how you role play and handle situations.

Steam Freinds name: [HGN] Zstan

Steam ID: ill get it

What position are you appling for? Swordsman, Archer, or Scout?: Swordsman

IC Name: Baldor Vawdrey

What does The Rebellious Ones stand for?: we protect people from danger from bandits the duke and the baron

Why do you want to join The Rebellious Ones?: I like to roleplay as a outlaw / Robin hood type character.. Seems like my type of faction so I thought i would give it a try

What does your position require?: To be strong, Have courage, and have a big sword

Write a short (Not to short) Backstory on your applicant: Baldor came from a distant landed named Olden. He was once a high ranking member in the White hand and was cast out for unknown reasons.The White Hand a extremely skilled assassin group that was started by one of Baldor's freinds.Baldor then made his long and tiring journey to Crussaria he found a couple of artifacts on his journey. He doesnt really know what they do but hes selling them to help his cause in the land he found called Crussaria.

Accepted, Ill be watching you though.


Oh god, your writing style is hideous. You go from 1st to 3rd to 100th Person point of view, using old style speech, with an occasional new slang thrown in. I see this as a minge group in the future.

You mean it isn't a minge group already, He hasn't even denied one person yet.

Because I know all these people for being good roleplayers.

Still, Their application are terrible, there should be a back story to define their characters play style.

Good point. I like constrictive critisicm. I think Ill add it.Thanks plunger :)

I recommend having them do at least a paragraph (Three to five sentences.). Also don't be afraid to put some applications on pending until you can see how they handle themselves as just a peasant.