Profit Faction

[killdead 660]

Profit:
About Us: Welcome to Profit! Here at the Profit faction we stand for two things  and they are Profit and Protection! Profit was established for stalkers who want to make a profit and  protect the world from the  zone. Profit is a friendly organization  although we will do what it takes to Protect the world and make a Profit. We do not protect the zone by just trying to exterminate all of the threat's such as the Duty faction does. We only want to "Contain" and also study  the zone as you might say or We only want  to ensure that the outside world will never see the horror's of the zone. The zone is an extremely dangerous place and withought guys like the Military, Duty, and us the zone's horror's would escape wreaking havok on the rest of the world. Nonsense faction's like Freedom do not understand this concept and sadly are are sworn enemy's. But you cannot protect the zone withought learning about it can you? No! Therefore we are friendly with  the ecologist  party because they can provide valuable data which we will purchase from them after our base camp is established . And Because we stand for the same cause in some ways Duty will be our best ally!

Position's:

Leader: Killdead 660

Co-Leader:
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Skull Brigade Commander: none

Sniper: none

Rifleman: none

Rifleman: none

Machine-Gunner: none

Demo-Man: none

Close-Quarters: none
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Scientist Brigade Commander: none

Scientist: none

Scientist: none

Scientist: none

Scientist Guard Commander: none

Scientist Guard: none

Scientist Guard: none







Your a stalker right? And being a stalker is about Profit. So join Profit and do the world a favor by helping to protect it!






Faction Relation's:

BEVA: Neutral
Monolith: Hostile
Military: Friendly
Freedom: Sworn Enemy
Merc's: Neutral
Loner's: Neutral
Black Rain: Neutral
Duty: Sworn Ally
Ecologist: Friendly
Inverted Sun: neutral

[KillSlim]

No support.
Ecologists, Duty-Wannabe's and ... Loners?

The description makes this sound like a carebear wrote about Duty.
Even if this group was worked on, it still wouldn't make any sense. You wouldn't come to the Zone to make money or a profitable career, you come here to escape.

You describe the Military as if they're a lovely, spiffing group of lads who want to do good. WRONG. If you care to read the Stalker Wiki, the Military are corrupt and lazy. They shoot Stalkers for fun and for sport, they are not as you describe them.

Please read: http://stalker.wikia.com/wiki/Military

In practice, they are one of the most corrupt organizations operating within the zone, shooting stalkers for sport, extorting them for money or ignoring smuggling operations in exchange for bribes.

Please, stop putting 's on the end of every noun. Let me give you a free English lesson:
's Is at the end of a noun when talking about something which belongs to something or someone; for example:
Killdead's spelling fails.
KillSlim's spelling is awesome.

I end on a bombshell: Utter fail.

[Midnight]

-Support
  A faction with soul purpose of making money is predestine to fail from the start. Like Killslim said your faction has no real beliefs or purpose of it's own but it just a mix of duty, military , and a hit of minge thrown in. My suggestion is either to just join a currently existing faction and put some time into that or read up on your stalker lore and think of a different faction with more defined goals other than "make teh monehz lul". Sorry if you take offense to this but there is just no way in hell this faction could work.

[killdead 660]

No support.
Ecologists, Duty-Wannabe's and ... Loners?

The description makes this sound like a carebear wrote about Duty.
Even if this group was worked on, it still wouldn't make any sense. You wouldn't come to the Zone to make money or a profitable career, you come here to escape.

You describe the Military as if they're a lovely, spiffing group of lads who want to do good. WRONG. If you care to read the Stalker Wiki, the Military are corrupt and lazy. They shoot Stalkers for fun and for sport, they are not as you describe them.

Please read: http://stalker.wikia.com/wiki/Military

In practice, they are one of the most corrupt organizations operating within the zone, shooting stalkers for sport, extorting them for money or ignoring smuggling operations in exchange for bribes.

Please, stop putting 's on the end of every noun. Let me give you a free English lesson:
's Is at the end of a noun when talking about something which belongs to something or someone; for example:
Killdead's spelling fails.
KillSlim's spelling is awesome.

I end on a bombshell: Utter fail.

I agree this group sucks cancel it lol.

[Plunger]

No support.
Ecologists, Duty-Wannabe's and ... Loners?

The description makes this sound like a carebear wrote about Duty.
Even if this group was worked on, it still wouldn't make any sense. You wouldn't come to the Zone to make money or a profitable career, you come here to escape.

You describe the Military as if they're a lovely, spiffing group of lads who want to do good. WRONG. If you care to read the Stalker Wiki, the Military are corrupt and lazy. They shoot Stalkers for fun and for sport, they are not as you describe them.

Please read: http://stalker.wikia.com/wiki/Military

In practice, they are one of the most corrupt organizations operating within the zone, shooting stalkers for sport, extorting them for money or ignoring smuggling operations in exchange for bribes.

Please, stop putting 's on the end of every noun. Let me give you a free English lesson:
's Is at the end of a noun when talking about something which belongs to something or someone; for example:
Killdead's spelling fails.
KillSlim's spelling is awesome.

I end on a bombshell: Utter fail.

I agree this group sucks cancel it lol.

You should also kill yourself.

[Locke]

Good input Plunger. Moved to the shityard.