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Title: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: CortezV on 03-08-2009
(THIS IS UNFINISHED)

<C: Access Terminal File Report - Nuclear>
<C: Administration Approval, Enter your password: ****>
<C: Accessing Files>

<UNKOWN - 1978 | Three Mile Island NPP - USA|>
<UNKOWN - 1984 | Windscale NPP - Germany| >
<APRIL 25 - 1986 |Test at Chernobyl NPP- Ukraine|>
<APRIL 26 - 1986| Accident at Chernobyl NPP - Ukraine|>
<APRIL 27 - 1986| Reports or Radiation Chernobyl NPP - Ukraine|>
<APRIL 28 - 1986| Pripyat Evacuated due to high radiation levels - Ukraine|>
<APRIL 29 - 1986 |Hazmat team Alpha - Ukraine|>
<SEPTEMBER 30 - 1999 | Nuclear Testing - Japan|
<OCTOBER 7, 1999 | Nuclear Testing- Japan|
< FEBRUARY 11 - 2000 | Nuclear Testing - Japan

<C: Accessing file :: APRIL 29 - 1986 |Hazmat team Alpha - Ukraine|>
<C: Personnel Files Accessing>

Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar
Cpl. Vasili Dumark
Pfc. Alyusha Boris
Pfc. Daniil Borya
Pvt. Miloslav Luka
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila


<C: Accessing Pvt. Vantrila, Cortez>


BACKGROUND STORY

File Report on <Vantrila, "Cortez">
AGE 38
OCCUPATION: Hazardous Material Sterilization Team.
SQUAD: Hazmat Team Alpha
STATUS: Resumed Dead.
COD (Optional): Exposure to high levels of radiation.


BACKGROUND STORY
April 29th Alpha team dispatched to the red forest. the team consists of seven people.

Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar
Cpl. Vasili Dumark
Pfc. Alyusha Boris
Pfc. Daniil Borya
Pvt. Miloslav Luka
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila


There mission was simple, Kill any, Cats, Dogs, Cows,  Birds, Any wild animals that has fur that
can attract radioactive dust.
just hours in, twenty four seven helicopters dropping tar on the ground, a sticky substance
guaranteed to keep the radioactive dust from spreading.
Kamrov and his team reached the evac zone,
The Evac Chopper was on a mission at the Nuclear Power Plant, A robot has crashed. Kamrov and his squad waited patiently
for the chopper, Four hours later they received a call, The chopper that was evacuating them tail
hit the tip of a Crane and crashed near the power plant.

Thirty Minutes later, the Millitary Checkpoints were sealed, Kamrov and his team had no choice
but to go Cordon.
The years went by, and they stayed in a small town in cordon, surviving off the land, dispite the
radiological deformities of the hairless creatures that roamed all over the location.
Each man in the squad vanished due to Radiation sickness. the remainder of the old squad
consists of the following.


Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily <Alive>
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar <Dead>
Cpl. Vasili Dumark <Alive>
Pfc. Alysha Boris <Dead>
Pfc. Daniil Borya <Dead>
Pvt. Miloslav Luka <Alive>
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila <Dead>

<:C Personal notes on :: Vantrila, Cortez >

<:C The squad member has a hard time understand who's the boss.
He obviously doesn't get it. I mean why waste my time with the damn kid if He wont understand a word I say.
-Kamrov Bomily.

<:C I understand Kamrov, but you have to train him, he's good, and enough to help clean up this mess! We need all the help we can get!
-Commander Kasparov

<:C The kids good, I'll give him that, Maybe he is good enough to join our squad, not like those pricks in Bravo.
Ehy Staff Sargent?
-Vasili Dumark.

<: Yes Commander, I understand sir, will do, Vasili, Shut up.
-Kamrov Bomily.

<:C - Accessing squad personnel menu. >


Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar
Cpl. Vasili Dumark
Pfc. Alyusha Boris
Pfc. Daniil Borya
Pvt. Miloslav Luka
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila


<:C - Accessing Staff Sargent Kamrov Bomily.>

File Report on <Bomily, "Kamrov">
AGE 26
OCCUPATION: Hazardous Material Sterilization Team.
SQUAD: Alpha
STATUS: Alive
COD (Optional): N/A



BACKGROUND STORY
At age 26 during the Chernobyl accident, Staff Sargent Kamrov Bomily.
Commading office of Hazmat Alpha, during the Chernobyl Accident
in 1986, His current location is unknown, yet all we know is he's in the zone and he's alive.
God help him.

<:C Accessing Personal Notes >

<:C Go suck a dick douche bag.
-Anonymous

<:C Who the fuck added that?>
-Kamrov Bomily

<:C Staff Sargent, Are you incapable of training that new recruit?  Mr.Vantrila?
If you are, I suggest you quit, if not, then get to it.
-Commander Kasparov

<:C Commander, the boy is unteachable.
-Kamrov Bomily

<:C Thats what I said about you.
-Commander Kasparov

<:C Alright, Fine I'll try, And if he doesn't learn and gets all killed you can take the fucking blame. With respect.

<:Accessing personnel file menu>


Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar
Cpl. Vasili Dumark
Pfc. Alyusha Boris
Pfc. Daniil Borya
Pvt. Miloslav Luka
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila


<: Accessing File <Remmiar, "Constantine">
<:C File report on < Remmiar, "Constantine >

File Report on <Remmiar, "Constantine">
AGE 29
OCCUPATION: Hazardous Material Sterilization Team.
SQUAD: Alpha
STATUS: Dead
COD (Optional): Hazardous Levels or Radiation/Radiation Sickness

< BACKGROUND STORY >
Adopted at age 16 by a Science Director of R&D of the military.

By the time he was 19, he joined the Hazardous Material Sterilization Team Alpha.
At age 29, He was sent to clean up a mess in Ukraine caused by the nuclear accident at Chernobyl.
Unable to be evacuated, him and his team were sent to Cordon.
There we believe he died.

<:C Accessing personal notes>

<:C Welcome to the team.>
-Commander Kasparov

<:C Be at training, 9:00 AM Sharp.>
-Commander Kasparov

<:C I have to apologise about your father kid, Good man, Devoted his life to us.>
-Commander Kasparov

<:C Accident at Chernobyl this morning, nothing seems to bad.>
-Kamrov Bomily.

<:C Were being called to Chernobyl, something about radiation, get prepared, we leave at 12:00 AM.>
-Kamrov Bomily

<Accessing Personnel menu...>


Ssgt. Kamrov Bomily
Sgt. Constantine Remmiar
Cpl. Vasili Dumark
Pfc. Alyusha Boris
Pfc. Daniil Borya
Pvt. Miloslav Luka
Pvt. Cortez Vantrila







Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: nofearkid on 03-08-2009
Not gonna lie. That's a shitty password.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Locke on 03-08-2009
Nice backstory.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: klp4 on 03-08-2009
Nice one.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: deluxulous on 03-08-2009
Good story, needs some grammar/spell checking, other than that it's fine.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Tunddruff on 09-08-2009
Arr, this be in the wrong section .... ARR
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Chaos on 11-09-2009
That's really nice. Good story too.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Dark Angel on 11-09-2009
Was too lazy to read but good job =D
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Silver Knight on 11-09-2009
Could be abit more in depth, but truely a example of how people should lay out their Stalker backstory.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Crimzon_Reaper on 11-09-2009
Meh, it's nothing special.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Mangoman on 15-10-2009
nice. two thumbs up.
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: Mangoman on 16-10-2009
i wish mine was layed out like that
Title: Re: FILE REPORT <Vantrila, Cortez> (Background story)
Post by: CortezV on 21-10-2009
Locking this, It shall be continued.