My Art

Started by geccoy, 10-05-2012

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geccoy

A place where I hope I can get some constructive criticism.
I don't do colours, since, I have no coloured pencils/ink, so I am limited to graphite. However, I find that it is usually sufficient in making a pretty thing.




A piece I am working on now is what I have begun to call, "Depression". Please ignore the fact the quality is shit. At the moment, I am debating hair styles for the girl.

Depression[spoiler]
[/spoiler]Shadow-blade[spoiler]
[/spoiler]Talk of Trees[spoiler][/spoiler]
Chell Sellitus[spoiler][/spoiler]

Zen

#1
Why are they all so, depressing? All of them could have amounted to something yet you decided it would be a good idea to add something SILLY too them or give them retarded names.

Lets take the first one, Depression.
Why do you need to name it something so; Unoriginal & Stupid. If your feeling depressed go sort it out, the female face is done fine; Dont need any other bullshit in there, just work on the face and then add a body or something. Go buy some colouring pencils or artists brushes/paint.

Shadow-Blade,
This is the one I am most disapointed with, if you hadent have put that god awful black shit spewing from his wrist and just kept and worked on the hand it would have been a masterpiece, again buy some colouring pencils or some shit.

Talk of Trees,
Nice tree shape, needs some foilage (THE GREEN STUFF OR OTHER COLOURED STUFF DEPENDING ON SEASON ONTOP.) To make it less depressing and silly. REFER TO BOLDED LETTERING ABOVE.

geccoy

Quote from: Zen on 11-05-2012
Why are they all so, depressing? All of them could have amounted to something yet you decided it would be a good idea to add something SILLY too them or give them retarded names.

Lets take the first one, Depression.
Why do you need to name it something so; Unoriginal & Stupid. If your feeling depressed go sort it out, the female face is done fine; Dont need any other bullshit in there, just work on the face and then add a body or something. Go buy some colouring pencils or artists brushes/paint.

Shadow-Blade,
This is the one I am most disapointed with, if you hadent have put that god awful black shit spewing from his wrist and just kept and worked on the hand it would have been a masterpiece, again buy some colouring pencils or some shit.

Talk of Trees,
Nice tree shape, needs some foilage (THE GREEN STUFF OR OTHER COLOURED STUFF DEPENDING ON SEASON ONTOP.) To make it less depressing and silly. REFER TO BOLDED LETTERING ABOVE.



Thanks for your input! I'll be sure to work on all the flaws you pointed out. I'm out to buy coloured pencils later.

geccoy

Added a girl. The chin I just changed, aswell as the band across her eye. However, my webcam is being weird and won't let me take pictures. I'll update it when I can. It's one of the first time I've actually seriously done something in coloured pencil. I usually suck at it.

jaik

sick art l0l
Blake.H: And im also working on whipping him into shape
Blake.H: He's nice
Blake.H: He doesn't moan
Blake.H: The sheer obedience is enough to fuel my erection anyway

Knife_cz



Silver Knight

#6
Almost a 3 year bump, congratulations.

Quotebreslau: if i cant cheat i dont wanna play
breslau: period

jaik

Quote from: SilverKnight on 16-05-2015
Almost a year year bump, congratulations.

year year year
Blake.H: And im also working on whipping him into shape
Blake.H: He's nice
Blake.H: He doesn't moan
Blake.H: The sheer obedience is enough to fuel my erection anyway

Silver Knight

Quote from: Jake on 17-05-2015
Quote from: SilverKnight on 16-05-2015
Almost a year year bump, congratulations.

year year year

Gotta stop typing when I'm concentrating on other things..

Quotebreslau: if i cant cheat i dont wanna play
breslau: period