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Title: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: deluxulous on 20-07-2010
I really like how this turned out. I did a little photoshopping on making the bus seem darker, adding some minor shadows... etc. I feel like it still should be a bit darker, but eh.

(https://forums.hypergamer.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg693.imageshack.us%2Fimg693%2F1570%2Flonelyloner.jpg&hash=8d6609e75c8a9ebdfec6ac0a2ee2159c515faa0d) (http://img693.imageshack.us/i/lonelyloner.jpg/)

Is currently my new wallpaper.

(If you want a different size, post here)
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: 2power on 20-07-2010
Nice
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: Locke on 20-07-2010
Hey pistol once I get on the good computer that has PS CS4 on it I will edit it for you. Add a few suggestions for what I could do in the meanwhile.
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: deluxulous on 20-07-2010
Quote from: ㅎㅎLocke on 20-07-2010
Hey pistol once I get on the good computer that has PS CS4 on it I will edit it for you. Add a few suggestions for what I could do in the meanwhile.

I like it the way it is, tbh, but if I had to make a few changes...

1. Background should be darker.
2. Ambient light from the fire should make more of an impression on the surfaces (I.E. Brighter light, darker dark)
3. Get that man a shadow.
4. Smooth out shadow beneath fire.
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: deluxulous on 21-07-2010
blah blah blah people dont read subforums
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: jaik on 21-07-2010
Needs fingerposing and I don't think he should be leaning his head against the wall, the body should.
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: deluxulous on 21-07-2010
Quote from: Jake on 21-07-2010
Needs fingerposing and I don't think he should be leaning his head against the wall, the body should.

There is finger posing. It's not really noticeable because the model's arms/hands/wrists/fingers are fucked up. As in they don't angle very well, they don't position very well, etc. I had to improvise.
Title: Re: "Forever Lonely"
Post by: Locke on 03-08-2010
Sorry, I forgot I offered to help you !

I will do this if I remember tomorrow :V