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Adam Chronovich

Started by Lent23, 28-10-2011

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28-10-2011 Last Edit: 28-10-2011 by Lent23
"Mommy, when is Daddy coming home?"
"Here, Alex.. Daddy sent us a package.. The soldier told us that it.. might be a while until Daddy's done with his service. Don't worry, you'll see him soon, Alex.."
"He's always gone! I never get to see him!"

One, keep autoplay video's out of non GVC threads.

Two, imposing yourself as a 'legendary loner' without first earning the title is a form of power gaming. You are forcing this title and mindset onto everyone you come across.

28-10-2011 #2 Last Edit: 28-10-2011 by Lent23
Fix'd
"Mommy, when is Daddy coming home?"
"Here, Alex.. Daddy sent us a package.. The soldier told us that it.. might be a while until Daddy's done with his service. Don't worry, you'll see him soon, Alex.."
"He's always gone! I never get to see him!"

I cringed at the sight of 'Legendary Loner' and a rank of 'Master'. No offense, but self-proclaimed legends tend to come off as narcissists. People who've had characters for over two to three years are still far from being classified as such, being known is hardly a requirement.
As for the little story... well, it reads like an advertisement.

"Bandits never have the kind of gear he sells"

You shitting me? Hawk would like to have a word with you.

Alright guys I fixed it, jeeze settle yourselves, I didn't mean to come off as promoting my own character. As I said, I was misinformed in some of the details. This is also an IC PDA from somebody that isn't himself, so I wasn't ICly promoting myself either. I didn't really mean to do anything like that. If you guys find any more mistakes like that, I'll fix it, but don't think that I'm trying to sound like I'm better than everybody.
"Mommy, when is Daddy coming home?"
"Here, Alex.. Daddy sent us a package.. The soldier told us that it.. might be a while until Daddy's done with his service. Don't worry, you'll see him soon, Alex.."
"He's always gone! I never get to see him!"

No, you aren't a master.
No, you aren't a legendary stalker, because once you leave none will remember you.
In addition; it isn't 2011 in HGN's SRP canon and when did you see a master legendary stalker wearing a typical bandit outfit?
Unrelated, but if you take the canon seriously; there's no such name as Adam in Russia nor Ukraine and everyone would take you as a joke. IC, of course because none in HGN is actually Russian and will never be able to tell what kind of names are acceptable and normal.
Blake.H: And im also working on whipping him into shape
Blake.H: He's nice
Blake.H: He doesn't moan
Blake.H: The sheer obedience is enough to fuel my erection anyway

I like it, good effort.

Quote from: Lent23 on 28-10-2011





Adam Chronovich, Master Stalker




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Not fixed. I still count myself as an expert stalker (well lower than master) while my character is 2 years 4 months old.
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