Forum RP "Planet X-18"

[Bl★ck Star]

(So short backstory:) The Ship called "Arthus" landed on a Unknown Planet and searching if Humanity could life on this planet cause the Earth is overfilled with humans. The Planet is currently known as Planet X-18 or Traemalus Ignition and seems good for Life it existes Water and sparely Gras. Several  "Buildings" or better called stations are on the planet that means, there was someone before us in here. But who was before us here and where are they now ? We saw a Shadow that looked human like, maybe thats the builders of the Stations We'll have a look at the Stations tommorow. Squad Zero is Taking the Leading Action. We'll hand them several suits for they're need to explore and maybe find the Builders of the Stations. The Earth Gonverment is talking something about aliens and such but i think we won't get contacts to aliens. Today is the Explore Mission of Squad Zero i wish them best luck and God Stay with them.... (here starts the story)


Arthus System Managment menu opening
"Welcome to the Arthus System Managment, please enter the file you want to read

X-18

"Opening Planet X-18 File"
Acctual Terraform of Planet: 10% Desert       10% Tropical       60% Tundra          15% Temperate      5% Sea.       15% Forest already done

Open Terraform Menu

"Opening Terraform menu"
Terraforming 2% Done

Shut down System

"System Shuting down"

(Send me a PM if you want a place of the below ones,Most spots can have more then only 1 player just ask me)

Human Forces

Arthus Captain: Afromana
Earth Gonverment Leader: LonglostBlake
Scientist Squad Leader:
Colonist Group Leader:
Squad Zero (5ppl):
Heavy Soldiers:
Commander:
Biotech: Radek
Engineers:
Supporters:
Field Operators:

Aliens:

Parasites: Assasinator
lower Alien creatures:
Higher Alien creatures: Nikolaz
Elite Alien creatures:Longlostblake
Alien Leader: Cloud

Free Places for users:
Colonists:
Lower Army members:
Loners:
Raiders:

Ship
Arthus: Stargate Universe opening Scene
Arthus Housing Rooms: http://nasty.org.ua/wp-content/plugins/wp-o-matic/cache/dd6c6_hue-and-funny-future-kitchen1.jpg


Exo/Power/Vital-Suits
Light Exo Suit: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=360609&d=1209771280
Vital Suit: http://xbox360media.ign.com/xbox360/image/article/751/751133/lost-planet-vital-suits-part-1-20061214043444825.jpg
Engineer Suits: http://subjectc.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2008/03/red_exosuit_fullcomp.jpg
Scout Exo Suits: http://i663.photobucket.com/albums/uu352/NocturnalKnight/Exo_suit_by_flyingdebris.jpg
Supporter Suits: http://cache-02.gawkerassets.com/assets/images/8/2008/01/Bionic.jpg
Heavy Power Armor: http://shreddingskin.files.wordpress.com/2008/03/thumb.jpg
Armor Suit: http://furuanimepanikku.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/08/armsuit.jpg




Alien Looks and Informations

Another playable Elite Alien: http://www.cgexplorer.com/_sys/wp/wp-content/uploads/gears-of-war-creature-design-sketch-rendering.jpg

Higher Alien to play: http://alteregos.artspan.com/show-image/732582/Brian-Dunn/creature-concept-0003.jpg

Another Higher Playable Alien: http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/146/4/8/Doom_3___Maggot_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

Higher Playable Alien in frost Areas: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_FGRH6mh-ATM/SWkWf8v2rfI/AAAAAAAAABU/sMlRg5bf1ug/s400/creature_blog_topic1C_1-vii.jpg

Higher Alien Mostly to distract Enemy Soldiers:
http://www.templates.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/deep-sea-creature.jpg

Elite Alien playable too :3 : http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/062/b/0/Creature_design_sculpt_by_firecrow78.jpg

Lower Alien Creature and you know ? its playable too :3 : http://www.melfx.com/images/creatureSuit001.jpg

Another Lower Alien: http://th01.deviantart.net/fs12/300W/i/2006/284/7/c/End_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

New Parasite: Dead Space: Head replacer

Higher Alien mostly seen in the Stations: http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs46/f/2009/180/6/d/Flesh_Worms_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

Lower Alien: http://divarts.net/photos/3d/2008/07/creature.jpg

Higher Alien: http://images.elfwood.com/art/y/e/yeahman/creature_with_no_name.jpg

Lower Alien: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6zauHO1pJ1k/SY5nV-kTukI/AAAAAAAAAVk/tv9NqYaI2Tg/s200/mc+barrett-+pinkyrevised.jpg

My Alien leader (speaks for him self):
http://www.visualwalkthroughs.com/deadspace/deadspace/59.jpg

DEAD SPACE - Best Scream Reaction

http://media.giantbomb.com/uploads/1/10459/929850-hive_mind_super.jpg

Higher Alien:
http://www.elfwood.com/art/s/h/sherman/alien_dragon.jpg

Blakes Elite Alien (creature walks on four legs and is 6 feet high and 8 feet long, the front two with huge claws. Its body is full of tiny course hairs(No bigger than 5mm), its rubbery skin showing through. The creatures Body consists of a head Section with a large unevenly-toothed constantly salavating Mouth (About 40cm in diamiter), with four beady eyes. Connected to the head his a large Bristly abdomen with the four Muscley legs attached. At the back of its abdomen is a tube shaped structure (About 10cm long) This is where the creature sprays its web at its pray as an attempt to entangle it(Effective up to 8 meters), the creature also uses this as an offensive and defensive attack. The creature can also pull the bristles(Which are about 10-15cm long) off its back and throw them, this is effective to 6 meteres. This attack is rarly used and only used in defence. Once the Prey is entangled in the web it would do one of two things, slash and stab it with its claws until its dead or simply eat it alive. The creature is A-Sexual, meaning it doesnt need a mate to breed. The creature looks after its child for at least five years until it is fully grown then the child leaves its parent. This means the creature only repoduces every 5 years and if seen will most likely have One child(Two is a rareaty) or be pregenent, the creatures lives for another 10-15 years(making it 20-25 years old when it dies). The creature lives in mulitple caves switching between them daily, the caves are lined with a non-sticky web this is purely used for insulation making it a good place to stay in the cold nights (Only if No-ones home of course). The creature hunts on the forest floor, as its size stops it from climbing. It hunts from Sunrise up to three-hours after the sunset. The creature may have adapted slightly to hot(By thinning out its hairs) and cold(By growing longer, thicker or condensed hairs):
http://3dcreatures.com/Jungle.jpg

Assassinators parasite but not so bulky (5cm,Living everywhere, uses its Victim as Host for Producing more Parasites):
http://xml.whatsonwhen.com/img_bg/23192.jpg
The Carrier of the Parasite(20cm big, biting his victim for injection the parasite):
http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_Z4-I2c8peEQ/R49bpEPf6cI/AAAAAAAAR20/jsMkd6pUugw/s320/CLOVERFIELD_PARASITE.jpg

Nikolaz ( Smart-Agile-Strong. But not Resitant to bullets so it hunts more for Colonists then Armored Persons.Acid Blood): http://www.allmystery.de/dateien/uf53569,1239648527,Alien%20Requiem.jpg


Plants
http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_G2ndBTccM70/SY9QB9O1vbI/AAAAAAAAAd4/qMToM9fVkPs/s320/alien+plant_7.jpg

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6558/socotraislanddragonbloori0.jpg

http://cghub.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=3728&d=1247087939

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o50/jenn_thoughtsnotspoken/weirdplant004.jpg

http://veerle.duoh.com/images/uploads/alienplants.jpg

http://farm1.static.flickr.com/45/112331030_9b0f5fccdb.jpg?v=1142320365


F.A.Q.

Q:Does the ship have any sort of forcefield and is it active in deploying troops, or is it just stationary until they need to leave the planet/orbits planet?
F: Acctualy the Arthus SHip is stationary on the planet with a force shield until they need to leave the planet


Q:What does the Humans use are they using bullets, lasers, plasma, etc? What kind of vehicles do they have?

F:Weappons of the lower Military Personal
   http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/4628/weaponssmall.jpg

  Weapons of the 5 Squad Zero member
  1: http://www.cncden.com/images2_ren/big_laserrifle.jpg as dual Shotgun
  2: http://dvice.com/pics/laser_beam_rifle.jpg   Sniper rifle
  3: http://wiki.battle.no/images/f/f6/Rocket_launcher.jpg  Rocket Launcher
  4: http://hight3ch.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/02/top10weapons.jpg  Electro Shocker
  5: http://images.myinternetservices.com/images/crysis-20070703104653176.jpg Assault Rifle Like

Q: What vehicles does Humans have

F: Transport: http://alt1040.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/warthog1.jpg
   Tank: http://portal.commandandconquer.com/SiteAssets/factions/images/units/RA3_FutureTank1.jpg
   Scout Vehicle: http://media.photobucket.com/image/Hover%20cycle/souleclipse01989/vulture.jpg
   Biger Transporter: http://depblog.weblogs.us/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/spaceship2_cg2.jpg

Q: Do we get re-inforcements from Earth?

F: No, The Earth is to far away (so its like Horror/Survival)


Q: How do the Humans Look like ?

F: Squad Zero Members:
[url=http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/CadetTK2386/ff_533_1280.jpg]http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y236/CadetTK2386/ff_533_1280.jpg[/url] http://pagesperso-orange.fr/ccrame/Images/Spirits%20Within/Final%20Fantasy%2034.jpg
   Lower Military Personal: http://crumaharashop.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2009/01/picture01-500x347.jpg
   Scientist: http://dog.fpsbanana.com/ss/srends/thm_34960.jpg
   Colonists: http://www.virginmedia.com/images/exoskeleton300x431.jpg
   Arthus Captain: http://img.scenereleases.info/image-6DEE_4A9C69B9.jpg
   Loner: http://www.treehugger.com/2007-12-06_083454ledski.jpg
   Heavy Soldier: http://i36.tinypic.com/28nz4m.png
   Biotech: http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2883/mech3lf.jpg
   Commander: http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c380/mohzart/main3.jpg
   Field operators: http://www.videogamesblogger.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/06/starcraft-ghost-nova-big.jpg
   
BIG WIP WRITE YOUR OPINION IN THIS THREAD PLZ

[Assassinator]

I think this is a good idea. After seeing how good the "HGN AND THEN" thread turned out even though it was not very serious and lacked a true story. I think this will turn out very good.

[Nikolaz72]

It ended lacking true story cuz of Unserious ppl. ISpy i and Afro are duing K

[Assassinator]

I'm stating that it had good roleplay even though it wasn't designed to be serious. With this starting out serious, good back-story, etc, etc. I think it'll turn out really nice.

[Lucidius]

Needs a bit less restrictions on what you can bee imo, also this should have it's own section, and in that section a template for applying for different thins.

As for CC, I know it's a bi wip, but the typos (I can point them out if you want :3) and a bit more detail R needed.

looks good so far though, and with an luck it can be fun.

Also, It's Mmmm Sweet Lemonade

[Afromana]

*Reffer to red text at Captain*

[Bl★ck Star]

please post more ideas and such and if you want somebody could write a biger backstory and the aliens arent discovered yet from the humans

[Lucidius]

please post more ideas and such and if you want somebody could write a biger backstory and the aliens arent discovered yet from the humans

Congrats, you've now encountered the same issue with my STALKER D20 thread, lol.

Uh, i'de suggest you go into a bit more detail as to how the humans are going about operations.

Do they have re-inforcements from earth? Or is it too far away to rely on any forces to help.

Are they using bullets, lasers, plasma, etc? What kind of vehicles do they have?

Does the ship have any sort of forcefield and is it active in deploying troops, or is it just stationary until they need to leave the planet/orbits planet?

Alot of un-answered questions here about how it'll be Humans versus Aliens wise, are we looking at Star Ship Troopers? (they are making a new one apparently)

[Bl★ck Star]

okay FAQ doing here now

Q:Does the ship have any sort of forcefield and is it active in deploying troops, or is it just stationary until they need to leave the planet/orbits planet?
F: Acctualy the Arthus SHip is stationary on the planet with a force shield until they need to leave the planet


Q:What does the Humans use are they using bullets, lasers, plasma, etc? What kind of vehicles do they have?

F:Weappons of the lower Military Personal
   http://www.danmil.de/Bilder/LW2.jpg

  Weapons of the 5 Squad Zero member
  1: http://www.cncden.com/images2_ren/big_laserrifle.jpg as dual Shotgun
  2: http://dvice.com/pics/laser_beam_rifle.jpg   Sniper rifle
  3: http://wiki.battle.no/images/f/f6/Rocket_launcher.jpg  Rocket Launcher
  4: http://hight3ch.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/02/top10weapons.jpg  Electro Shocker
  5: http://images.myinternetservices.com/images/crysis-20070703104653176.jpg Assault Rifle Like

Q: What vehicles does Humans have

F: Transport: http://alt1040.com/wp-content/uploads/2006/05/warthog1.jpg
   Tank: http://portal.commandandconquer.com/SiteAssets/factions/images/units/RA3_FutureTank1.jpg
   Scout Vehicle: http://media.photobucket.com/image/Hover%20cycle/souleclipse01989/vulture.jpg
   Biger Transporter: http://depblog.weblogs.us/wp-content/uploads/2008/01/spaceship2_cg2.jpg
   

Q: Do we get re-inforcements from Earth?

F: No, The Earth is to far away (so its like Horror/Survival)


Q: How do the Humans Look like ?

F: Squad Zero Members: http://blog.theavclub.tv/wp-content/uploads/2007/01/halo-suit.jpg
   Lower Military Personal: http://www.space.com/images/070104_future_suit_02.jpg
   Scientist: http://dog.fpsbanana.com/ss/srends/thm_34960.jpg
   Colonists: http://www.virginmedia.com/images/exoskeleton300x431.jpg
   Arthus Captain: http://img.scenereleases.info/image-6DEE_4A9C69B9.jpg
   Loner: http://www.treehugger.com/2007-12-06_083454ledski.jpg
   

[Lucidius]

No offense but the weapon roster doesn't seem too fitting. To be slightly more constructive then most anyone who will post here, I can post some interesting (not the best, the best, the best, but something usable) here.

Srsly, XM8's with space travel.

Edit: First 3 armor pics where within the top 8 hits for 'future armor'. You should go a bit more in-depth when it comes to this kinda stuff >:(.





Don't mind me, i'll just leave this right here *drools*


Killzone sucks but the helghast style makes me fap.

[Bl★ck Star]

okay thanks for the pictures there cool ill change them now

[Lucidius]

Just some key words for your own searches:

concept light armor heavy assualt future



oh and this armor is jawesome.

[Radek]

Ey can the Heavy soldier drive the tank?

[Radek]

Prototyp powerarmor? and if granted Sign me up!

[Bl★ck Star]

yes Heavy is allowed to drive the tank and youre already signed as heavy

[Bl★ck Star]

Edited a few things 2 new classes

Biotech and Commander

[Lucidius]

I don't think heavy should be able to drive vehicles imo.

Should be set up a bit like planetside.

No Armor/Basic Armor and Light armor can pilot vehicles, heavy can be passangers only, and power suits can only be lifted by specific vehicles.

Just an idea though. Makes sense to me :3.

Also now that I think about it you might want to base some stuff off of that aswell.

[Radek]

God this have to start soon.. I love my Biotech armor and The entire Consept looks awsome.
I can work on a description of the Biotech if you want to, if you do then i need to knwo if you want it to be more robotic(Ai) in it's thinking or should it just be a heavly upgraded human?

[Bl★ck Star]

Sure you can work on a Description but make it more Ai like and well start soon. i edited backstory a bit more

More Classes Added

Engineers
Supporters
Field Operators

and

Higher Alien Skin

Ill add more aliens soon

[Bl★ck Star]

Update for Aliens

New Skins revealed of Aliens

Another playable Elite Alien: http://www.cgexplorer.com/_sys/wp/wp-content/uploads/gears-of-war-creature-design-sketch-rendering.jpg

Higher Alien to play: http://alteregos.artspan.com/show-image/732582/Brian-Dunn/creature-concept-0003.jpg

Another Higher Playable Alien: http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/146/4/8/Doom_3___Maggot_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

Higher Playable Alien in frost Areas: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_FGRH6mh-ATM/SWkWf8v2rfI/AAAAAAAAABU/sMlRg5bf1ug/s400/creature_blog_topic1C_1-vii.jpg

Higher Alien Mostly to distract Enemy Soldiers:
http://www.templates.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/deep-sea-creature.jpg

Elite Alien playable too :3 : http://fc06.deviantart.com/fs43/f/2009/062/b/0/Creature_design_sculpt_by_firecrow78.jpg

Lower Alien Creature and you know ? its playable too :3 : http://www.melfx.com/images/creatureSuit001.jpg

Another Lower Alien: http://th01.deviantart.net/fs12/300W/i/2006/284/7/c/End_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

Parasite: Dead Space: Head replacer

Higher Alien mostly seen in the Stations: http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs46/f/2009/180/6/d/Flesh_Worms_by_Beloved_Creature.jpg

Lower Alien: http://divarts.net/photos/3d/2008/07/creature.jpg

Higher Alien: http://images.elfwood.com/art/y/e/yeahman/creature_with_no_name.jpg

Lower Alien: http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_6zauHO1pJ1k/SY5nV-kTukI/AAAAAAAAAVk/tv9NqYaI2Tg/s200/mc+barrett-+pinkyrevised.jpg

[Dark Angel]

Supporting coz i was told to do it.

[Bl★ck Star]

I want to hear if people are thinking this should get his own section for apps different thread for each zone etc.

[Assassinator]

I think it should.

[Radek]

I think this could get super awsome

[Bl★ck Star]

okay this is on hold until i get more ideas and maybe his own section