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HyperGaming Machinima| "The War - Teaser Trailer"

Started by CortezV, 20-09-2009

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HGN Machinima| "The War - Teaser Trailer"

For our upcoming 10 minute video The War.

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  In the year 2030, A research corporation named by "Microcom" The lead developer for Transhuman technology
was formed in a future scene of the United States. Their main purpose was to perform research on every-day life, and to form ideas and create things that would overcome the challenges of  life. They were shown as an innocent kind, creating and publishing their new devices through the media. They were shown as "one of the most flourishing businesses as of today". They were a step forward in human engineering.
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        Funded by the United states military in 2055, they were given the money, the tools, and the location. They were taken out of commercial business and put into a more private environment. They had scrapped their ideas, the media was given a reason for the sudden cease in research, and life went on as if they were never there, of course, the products were duplicated as a means of protecting the current fluctuation of life, and a smaller company was given the image of buying out everything and re-distributing it.
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        In the year 2070, The military was now fully into research of a new kind of combat warrior. CTFM, as the military shortened it., were on their first testing day of a fully functioning trans-human machine, capable of doing most things that were scrapped in the past. It was given a prototype weapon, similar to an old OICW. It was seen to be equipped with an incendiary projectile launcher, a rifle attachment using 5.56x45mm NATO rounds, containing a titanium head. a GPS device, capable of monitoring heart signatures up to a quarter of a mile, a bayonet, capable of being launched 500 yards a scope, capable of seeing well over 1.5km. The test was complete, the machine was able to successfully aim at and fully neutralize all 50 targets set up in a matter of one and a half minutes, with an accuracy count of 98.7%. More research was soon gone into what they had tested that day.
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        In the year 2085, They had created a line of almost 1,000 different types of recognizable figures, they performed almost perfectly in their testing stages. They were taken into combat, and outperformed any soldier used on the battlefield. Almost the entire military was replaced, except for the operators and their squads. The CTFM was given full use of their devices, now remotely controlled. Many conflicts were won by this method of battle, and nobody was up to fighting them. The United states, was now the global superpower over everything, they controlled what went on. If something happened, someone would be killed. Simple. A "pool" of all the present day's knowledge was stored in it. And every unit was equipped with a small database of information on everything they knew.
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In the year 2097 The Cybernetic Transhuman Forces had overthrown the United State's military. They had , as the Cybernetic Forces pushed from Alaska, their location now revealed to Canada, down towards the American frontal lines, Soon, taking over cities, and store whats left of humanity inside them. Finding the fit non-transhumans and picking them out by hand, and making them go through the process of Transhumanism.
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2100 All great nations have fallen by the Cybernetic forces, from Russia, to the UK, to America,
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No great nations are left to fight, Humans are rounded up and put in cramped quarters in small citys.
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2107 Whats left of humanity can no longer take being cage, a large out break of fighting begins to take place in a city known as Akrov in Ohio. nothing else is written here about the current fighting that continues today.

Special Thanks to SpAcy for rewriting the dialog above.


Thom's Law
"Nothing can not produce something. If there was ever a time when there was nothing, there would STILL be nothing."

For the helicopter scene you should have avoided using the mouse or using a really low sensitivity and moving your mouse alot, also using Mouse Smoothing would ahve made it look a bit more cinimatic.

Definably lacking in terms of content, you should add a bit more, and draw out the white/black fuzzy screen after the explosion, possibly use fade out and fade in the black part with the Coming Soon text.

If I didn't know this video was about what I was I would be so confused.
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Quote from: Lucidius on 20-09-2009
For the helicopter scene you should have avoided using the mouse or using a really low sensitivity and moving your mouse alot, also using Mouse Smoothing would ahve made it look a bit more cinimatic.

Definably lacking in terms of content, you should add a bit more, and draw out the white/black fuzzy screen after the explosion, possibly use fade out and fade in the black part with the Coming Soon text.

If I didn't know this video was about what I was I would be so confused.

This actually has nothing to do with the real movie, its just to tell people that were working on one thats more along the lines of action.


But all in all your right, I was in a rush.


Thom's Law
"Nothing can not produce something. If there was ever a time when there was nothing, there would STILL be nothing."

Ooooh okay, Tought you meant t to be a teaser or a preview.
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