DEFUNCT ACEONIC RACE APPLICATIONS/LISTINGS

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Kokkaku Kishu

#50
Quote from: Wolfie on 23-04-2012
whatever happened to ze half-demons?
if i remember correctly there was ever only one (seeing as how i posted that race app back in Ermor times) and he ended up dying without continuing the race. plus i believe after Ermor Quin said never again with that race.


Alaizia

 

       
  • Race: Jovians
  • Defining Features:
  • The Jovians are an ancient race exiled from their reality by their creators. In an alternate timeline and far into the future, the Jovians were a gestalt race bred from the DNA of an extinct race of elves known as the "Pallavar". Using magic, science and the blood of a thousand slaves, the progenitor race created the Jovians to be the perfect slave. They were muscular, obediant and quite smart. The Jovians were also very quixotic when not attended by one of their masters and tended to murder one-another when not chained.
  • The Progenitor race was wise and immediately saw the possibilty of revolt. They soon installed a "Religion" of sorts into the genes of the Jovians. Every Jovian that was born would regard thier masters as Gods.
  • As the Jovians were exposed to thier master's culture, they slowly absorbed the inherent magical energies that were used to keep day-to-day life running smoothly. Several years after their creation, packs of Jovians that were being shipped across the world would siphon energies from the mage-powered Thunder Tram, forcing the slaves to be only transported in groups of three.
  • Jovians, when exposed to magic would seem to stratify. One would seem to get more curious and manic, one would get more aggressive and brutish and a third would become bold and certain. Not all Jovians experienced this change but the ones who did would not exhibit the changes for long.
  • It wasn't until the Emergence Crisis that Jovians had any real will of their own. During the Crisis, a large project of the progenitors underwent critical stresses and burst with magical energy. The 54,000 Jovians who were working on the project were assumed dead as the magical blast tore apart a major city.
  • Years later, it was discovered that the Jovians who were working on the project had been thrown backwards in time, to when the Jovian race was first created. These Jovians started an insurrection that planned to overthrow Progenitor society on the day of the Emergence Crisis. Long story short, the Emergence produced a mana-dependant strain of Jovians that mutated over a six thousand year span, alongside their ancestors. They would have succeeded in their rebellion, too.
  • The Aberrant  Jovians were the ones who caused the Emergent Crisis, and with it, mutated themselves with an immeasurable arcane energy. Those 54,000 Jovians, instead of being flung back in time, were thrown into another dimension. Now, without their god-leaders to guide them, they looked to themselves as gods of all reality.
  • Jovians in Aceon are a member of one of the Three Pathes.
  • The Noble Path - Those Jovians of the Noble Path believe that all actions, regardless of purpose, should be the ones that cause the greatest good. This path is perceived in many ways but generally the Noble see Jovian Good as the Greatest Good. Nobles are lanky or gangly and have pale white skin. A Noble who is of an especially high standing will embed spikes of gold into his body. Most nobles grow a collar of bone as they mature. Full grown nobles have a collar that only exposes the nose and above. Nobles are most commonly female but males aren't that rare.
  • The Brutal Path - Jovians who obsess over physical fitness are those who worship the Brutal Path. Evolution and nature are huge tenants of the Brutal Path and Brutes tend to be more aggressive in any given situation. Brutes embody the idea of "Survival of the Fittest" and only obey non-Nobles when it is to thier personal interest. Brutes have wide shoulders and bone structures jutting out of their backs or heads and always have naturally tanned or olive skin. A fully matured Brute may grow bull's horns or any other strange spikes or bone structures on its body. Brutes are predominately male.
  • The Docile Path - Jovians who believe that it does not matter what they do are born into this path. What the Docile do is uncertain, if they even do anything at all. The Docile do what they please and fear no concequence and are almost hedonistic (although not all of them). Docile obey the Noble but express no sense of urgency. Docile are prone to procrastinate or intentionally misinterpret a task. Although the Docile are androgynous and have skin that is almost silver, they can and often do look almost like a natural human. Immature docile only have 3 digits on each foot/hand but mature to even more effectively resemble a human. Docile are invariably hermaphrodites.
  • Why this race and not another?: Holy shit Portkins wrote my backstory for me.

Alaizia

Quote from: Ragolution on 23-04-2012
Quote from: Duraga on 23-04-2012


       
  • Race: Jovians
  • Defining Features:
  • The Jovians are an ancient race exiled from their reality by their creators. In an alternate timeline and far into the future, the Jovians were a gestalt race bred from the DNA of an extinct race of elves known as the "Pallavar". Using magic, science and the blood of a thousand slaves, the progenitor race created the Jovians to be the perfect slave. They were muscular, obediant and quite smart. The Jovians were also very quixotic when not attended by one of their masters and tended to murder one-another when not chained.
  • The Progenitor race was wise and immediately saw the possibilty of revolt. They soon installed a "Religion" of sorts into the genes of the Jovians. Every Jovian that was born would regard thier masters as Gods.
  • As the Jovians were exposed to thier master's culture, they slowly absorbed the inherent magical energies that were used to keep day-to-day life running smoothly. Several years after their creation, packs of Jovians that were being shipped across the world would siphon energies from the mage-powered Thunder Tram, forcing the slaves to be only transported in groups of three.
  • Jovians, when exposed to magic would seem to stratify. One would seem to get more curious and manic, one would get more aggressive and brutish and a third would become bold and certain. Not all Jovians experienced this change but the ones who did would not exhibit the changes for long.
  • It wasn't until the Emergence Crisis that Jovians had any real will of their own. During the Crisis, a large project of the progenitors underwent critical stresses and burst with magical energy. The 54,000 Jovians who were working on the project were assumed dead as the magical blast tore apart a major city.
  • Years later, it was discovered that the Jovians who were working on the project had been thrown backwards in time, to when the Jovian race was first created. These Jovians started an insurrection that planned to overthrow Progenitor society on the day of the Emergence Crisis. Long story short, the Emergence produced a mana-dependant strain of Jovians that mutated over a six thousand year span, alongside their ancestors. They would have succeeded in their rebellion, too.
  • The Aberrant  Jovians were the ones who caused the Emergent Crisis, and with it, mutated themselves with an immeasurable arcane energy. Those 54,000 Jovians, instead of being flung back in time, were thrown into another dimension. Now, without their god-leaders to guide them, they looked to themselves as gods of all reality.
  • Jovians in Aceon are a member of one of the Three Pathes.
  • The Noble Path - Those Jovians of the Noble Path believe that all actions, regardless of purpose, should be the ones that cause the greatest good. This path is perceived in many ways but generally the Noble see Jovian Good as the Greatest Good. Nobles are lanky or gangly and have pale white skin. A Noble who is of an especially high standing will embed spikes of gold into his body. Most nobles grow a collar of bone as they mature. Full grown nobles have a collar that only exposes the nose and above. Nobles are most commonly female but males aren't that rare.
  • The Brutal Path - Jovians who obsess over physical fitness are those who worship the Brutal Path. Evolution and nature are huge tenants of the Brutal Path and Brutes tend to be more aggressive in any given situation. Brutes embody the idea of "Survival of the Fittest" and only obey non-Nobles when it is to thier personal interest. Brutes have wide shoulders and bone structures jutting out of their backs or heads and always have naturally tanned or olive skin. A fully matured Brute may grow bull's horns or any other strange spikes or bone structures on its body. Brutes are predominately male.
  • The Docile Path - Jovians who believe that it does not matter what they do are born into this path. What the Docile do is uncertain, if they even do anything at all. The Docile do what they please and fear no concequence and are almost hedonistic (although not all of them). Docile obey the Noble but express no sense of urgency. Docile are prone to procrastinate or intentionally misinterpret a task. Although the Docile are androgynous and have skin that is almost silver, they can and often do look almost like a natural human. Immature docile only have 3 digits on each foot/hand but mature to even more effectively resemble a human. Docile are invariably hermaphrodites.
  • Why this race and not another?: Holy shit Portkins wrote my backstory for me.


Yup. Yeah. Uh-huh.
so does this mean accepted XD of course it does lol

Beano

Quote from: CPftw on 26-04-2012
their eyelids close horizontally instead of vertically.
Don't you mean they close vertically?
All hope must be disregarded

12:37 PM - Beano #JizzCake: how is babby formed
12:37 PM - SumRandomGuy: once upon a time
12:38 PM - SumRandomGuy: there was this giant big thingy thing
12:38 PM - SumRandomGuy: its called my benis

Alaizia

Quote from: Beano on 26-04-2012
Quote from: CPftw on 26-04-2012
their eyelids close horizontally instead of vertically.
Don't you mean they close vertically?

no he means they close from side to side, not up and down....its a unique feature...

Alaizia

Race: Gedwey Kyn (This is translated into "Shining Kind"
The Gedwey Kyn's origin is unknown but they have a large city to the south near the Nomas deserts. The Gedwey Kyn live their lives governed by the Council of Colour, a gathering of the two wisest male and female Gedwey Kyn of each separate Caste. While they have a militaristic Caste they have no desire to spread further than they have already. 

Defining Features: Metallic-colored skin (the coloration depends on their caste), bright glowing eyes with no visible whites, their eyelids close horizontally instead of vertically. They have only 3 digits on each hand and foot, finely pointed teeth.
Magic-enriched blood: The Gedwey's blood is unique in the fact that it has a highly magic potential, this magical essence seems to be controlled by certain emotions depending on the subjects Caste. Not all subjects have the ability to use magic, but all have the potential to have magic. In a Gedwey the magic trait is sex-linked to the X chromosome making it so that Females have higher magical potential then males, but this does not mean that Females have stronger magic's then males.
Before puberty A Gedwey child is neither Male nor female, but have the ability to flit in between genders and castes in a matter of seconds. This is caused by the magical properties of their blood being highly unstable at the time. When the Child hit puberty however the essence begins to stabilize and the Child will be put through a ritual to decide what gender and caste they will belong to.
Castes: Each caste makes up a different part of the Gedwey society and are named for the different colors of their skin.
The Red Caste: These Gedwey are tall, bulky and strong. They are characterized by the black spikes that grow on their bodies in patches, the stronger the red the more spikes are apparent (no they aren't red cacti). The Reds are predominantly male and make up the Gedwey Military and other jobs that require brutal strength (I.E: Guards, soldiers, enforcers, ETC.) Magic users of the red persuasion tend to be most powerful when they use their powers out of anger.
The Blue Caste: This caste is predominantly female. The women of this caste are for the most part considered highly attractive by other Gedwey, being short, curvaceous and well endowed. The blues are characterized by the entrancing swirling blue patterns that cover their silver skin. This Caste possesses extremely high magic potential and most, if not all of these female have the ability to use magic and their magic's are the strongest when they are excited. They usually take up the role of teachers, mages (and other magical classes), scholars and scribes, but also fill entertainment roles such as Dancers.
The Green Caste: The Green Caste has no predominant gender. They fill the role of farmers and food producers; they are the most jovial of the Gedwey Kyn and are more lively then other castes.  Greens are the tallest of their kind but are very thin. Their passions lie in drinking, partying, dancing and music. They are always ready for a feast and can never pass up a chance for a festival. Their magic is generally the most easily used as it is strongest when the caster is happy.
The Orange Caste:  The tinkers and tricksters of the Gedwey Kyn world. These quick fingered hooligans make machinery for their different colored cousins but design intricate traps and devices to outwit their own color. Oranges can be found hidden away in their workshops or trying to sneak into someone else's. Their magic is often not used as they prefer to rely on their creations rather than the laughter enhanced magic they have. The more creative an engineer they are the larger the ridges along their forearms are. In appearance they are generally smaller and squatter than other Castes.
The Brown Caste: Builders and labourers, muscle is very much greater than mind or magic in the case of this Caste. Big, bulky and boring, Browns are content in the simple work of manual labour. They stronger they are the larger the ridges upon their back are, to help when lifting the great stones of their architectural designs. Due to the lack of creativity Gedwey Kyn architecture is incredibly similar, with a basic design repeated in different sizes depending on the need of the building. Magic is hard to access for these brown hued builders but is strongest when the caster is calm and concentrated.
The Black Caste: The undesirable and lacking of the Gedwey Kyn. A defect carried in all of their kind leaves one in five emotionally crippled, therefore magically crippled as well. With no magical essence in their blood they have a darker, blander appearance with large dark tattoo like markings under their eyes. These grey skinned outcasts form much of lower class in society picking up the jobs like cleaners and grave keepers. However all of Gedwey Kyn priesthood consists of the Black Caste as they have no magical ability to corrupt the gifts of their Gods. The Black Caste is the only Caste not represented in the Council of Colour.  They are of average height but are incredibly thin, their skeleton is easily visible through their gaunt build.

Why this race and not another: They seem super awesome. This is Dura's creation but had problems posting it so I am instead.

I wanted to add color XD so I did it

Beano

Quote from: Duraga on 26-04-2012
Quote from: Beano on 26-04-2012
Quote from: CPftw on 26-04-2012
their eyelids close horizontally instead of vertically.
Don't you mean they close vertically?

no he means they close from side to side, not up and down....its a unique feature...
Yeah, that's vertical
All hope must be disregarded

12:37 PM - Beano #JizzCake: how is babby formed
12:37 PM - SumRandomGuy: once upon a time
12:38 PM - SumRandomGuy: there was this giant big thingy thing
12:38 PM - SumRandomGuy: its called my benis

Alaizia

Quote from: Beano on 26-04-2012
Quote from: Duraga on 26-04-2012
Quote from: Beano on 26-04-2012
Quote from: CPftw on 26-04-2012
their eyelids close horizontally instead of vertically.
Don't you mean they close vertically?

no he means they close from side to side, not up and down....its a unique feature...
Yeah, that's vertical

isn't that horizontaslly <->   and what do you think of them ?

Ragolution

If they closed horizontally they would look look like ( I ), if they closed TO the horizon, they'd be (---)

The same goes for vertical, except vice versa. (Closed vertically (---) , Closes to the vertices's ( I )  )

CPftw

Is that a very vague approval? And yeah they close like humans don't.
pffft

Ragolution

Quote from: Kokkaku Kishu on 23-04-2012
Main Race: Human


           Sub-Race: Kryptoras


The debate upon whether they should be considered a race or subrace was a long and heated disscusion between much of the upper guilds-men. these "results" of a dark brotherhood of mages' "experiments" resulted in the loss of an entire generation of children from few select villages. these children, at various stages of age, were then exposed to dark rituals and magics. these resulted in the following traits:


-oddly colored hair
-irregularly colored pupils
-conductivity of shadows through biological means (whether through it being their own biological concious/body, or other means of outside states i.e. inanimate shadows)
-altered mental states
-severe sensitivity to light


Many children were forced to battle it out in death-matches to prove whom was the strongest. this resulted in cruelty complexes and a severe belief in ultimate governing through strength. however, some children were also purged of most emotion through this and repress their emotions in an attempt to repress the rage induced into them through the trials. many also escaped and/or turned on their local brotherhood heads, killing them. this resulted in the diffusion of them into the population, resulting in:


pure-bloods: the original experiments. retain all traits of the experiments


          second generation: offspring of 2 pure-bloods, retain physical characteristics of the experiments and the dark magics bestowed into them by their parents, but only at half the effectiveness


Half-Hearts: mix of 1 pure-blood parent and one "other" parent. child retains some physical characteristics. powers are a recessive trait and if owned at all are at severe depletion of power (ie simple wiring or a knife at max)




the powers bestowed upon the experiments were however selective, and not all results of the experiments produced magic powers, merely, others retained only physical characteristics, while others were severely affected mentally and developed sever cases of psychosis.




Why this race and no other: I believe i have kept this race from being overpowered. the pure-bloods themselves (1st generation anyway) will only remain in the gene pool for about one to two maps at which case they will no longer be able to be played. also with the "selectiveness" of their decided powers, a magic application would have to be in order and pass by the admin's standards to fit, but would still not be required if placed. i believe this also would be a race for the person wanting a darker history to their character, whether they wish to be an evil knight with an arrogance and rage problem, or an almost entirely nonexistent emotional side wanderer with a dark and mysterious history. i believe there would be a few people who would enjoy such a character to be and i believe others might also enjoy RP-ing with such characters as it would give a new breath of attitude to some people on the server. If you wish you may also compare some of their attitudes to that of the Sith race from star wars or to the Golden Darkness (i do not condone the show for that one i just like the character design).

Denied, we have enough human subraces and this one's overpowered to boot.

Demonizer877

#61
Repealed
Awesomeness is the best trait one can have

ruaidhri

Race:
Fomorian[/size]Defining Features:[/font] In
Irish mythology
, were a semi-divine race who inhabited Ireland in ancient times. They may have once been believed to be the beings who preceded the gods, similar to the Greek Titans. It has been suggested that they represent the gods of chaos and wild nature, as opposed to the Tuatha Dé Danann who represent the gods of human civilization. They are sometimes said to have had the body of a man and the head of a goat, or to have had one eye, one arm and one leg, but some, for example Elatha, were very beautiful.
[/size]Why this race and not another?: I am Irish and i enjoy my country,s foclor[/color]

geccoy

#63
Quote from: ruaidhri on 27-04-2012
Race:
FomorianDefining Features: In
Irish mythology
, were a semi-divine race who inhabited Ireland in ancient times. They may have once been believed to be the beings who preceded the gods, similar to the Greek Titans. It has been suggested that they represent the gods of chaos and wild nature, as opposed to the Tuatha Dé Danann who represent the gods of human civilization. They are sometimes said to have had the body of a man and the head of a goat, or to have had one eye, one arm and one leg, but some, for example Elatha, were very beautiful.
Why this race and not another?: I am Irish and i enjoy my country,s foclor



Fabulous description, however, you copy and pasted that from Wikipedia.

Ragolution

Quote from: ruaidhri on 27-04-2012
Race:
Fomorian[/size]Defining Features:[/font] In
Irish mythology
, were a semi-divine race who inhabited Ireland in ancient times. They may have once been believed to be the beings who preceded the gods, similar to the Greek Titans. It has been suggested that they represent the gods of chaos and wild nature, as opposed to the Tuatha Dé Danann who represent the gods of human civilization. They are sometimes said to have had the body of a man and the head of a goat, or to have had one eye, one arm and one leg, but some, for example Elatha, were very beautiful.
[/size]Why this race and not another?: I am Irish and i enjoy my country,s foclor[/color]

We STILL don't need more human subraces.

Alaizia

Quote from: Ragolution on 27-04-2012
Quote from: ruaidhri on 27-04-2012
Race:
FomorianDefining Features: In
Irish mythology
, were a semi-divine race who inhabited Ireland in ancient times. They may have once been believed to be the beings who preceded the gods, similar to the Greek Titans. It has been suggested that they represent the gods of chaos and wild nature, as opposed to the Tuatha Dé Danann who represent the gods of human civilization. They are sometimes said to have had the body of a man and the head of a goat, or to have had one eye, one arm and one leg, but some, for example Elatha, were very beautiful.
Why this race and not another?: I am Irish and i enjoy my country,s foclor

We STILL don't need more human subraces.

yeah, but we could always use more gedwey castes ! kidding, i am realy kidding

Alaizia

btw who will be putting the Gedwey Kyn on the Race list ? since they have been accepted ?

DarkThunder2

#67
 Race: Fallen Angel
Sub Race: None, this is a new race im making.
Here is the details of the Fallen Angels in this lore I made and axidentally put on the lore page, sorry about that.
  The Fallen Angels, those that came from the top of the clouds, have fallen from their life from up above, the Aether.
  "After contact from the Aether and the surface had been destroyed by the Rulers of the Aether, a band of rebels fought the Rulers, and lost. Those that escaped execution went into hiding. Then, the remaining rebels gathered together, and made a plan. Some of those with them would stay and continue fighting the Rulers, and the rest  would flee with their lives. The ones that fled had nowhere to go, so they decided to go the one place no one could look for them: the surface. So, together, they jumped off the edge of the Aether and fell to the surface. They became the Fallen Angels. Of course, the Fallen Angels have very long lifespans, even longer than the elves, unless killed, so the original Fallen Angels can still be seen around today. They are treated as normal people, and can be identified by their tattered, burnt, or ruined clothing. They keep the clothing as the symbol of their heritage. When new, young Fallen Angels reach 13 years (50 Human years, 20 Elven years) of age, the young Angel's clothes are burnt or ruined to show their heritage." 

      -Paragraph 78, Chapter 92, of the Book Of Souls-

I hope you like my Race idea.

-DarkThunder2
So, did anyone else see a floating cactus today? Just me?
I better stop wearing glasses with stickers on them, I guess.

Ragolution

Quote from: DarkThunder2 on 12-05-2012
Race: Fallen Angel
Sub Race: None, this is a new race im making.
Here is the details of the Fallen Angels in this lore I made and axidentally put on the lore page, sorry about that.
  The Fallen Angels, those that came from the top of the clouds, have fallen from their life from up above, the Aether.
  "After contact from the Aether and the surface had been destroyed by the Rulers of the Aether, a band of rebels fought the Rulers, and lost. Those that escaped execution went into hiding. Then, the remaining rebels gathered together, and made a plan. Some of those with them would stay and continue fighting the Rulers, and the rest  would flee with their lives. The ones that fled had nowhere to go, so they decided to go the one place no one could look for them: the surface. So, together, they jumped off the edge of the Aether and fell to the surface. They became the Fallen Angels. Of course, the Fallen Angels have very long lifespans, even longer than the elves, unless killed, so the original Fallen Angels can still be seen around today. They are treated as normal people, and can be identified by their tattered, burnt, or ruined clothing. They keep the clothing as the symbol of their heritage. When new, young Fallen Angels reach 13 years (50 Human years, 20 Elven years) of age, the young Angel's clothes are burnt or ruined to show their heritage." 

      -Paragraph 78, Chapter 92, of the Book Of Souls-

I hope you like my Race idea.

-DarkThunder2

Denied

We presently do not need a race like this in Aceon.

Alaizia

if its not to much  to ask...can someone add the gedwey to the list

CPftw

What happened to the race list?
pffft

Ragolution


CoolFeerman


Braydent30

Don't talk about Port's mom like that! You got to be more insulting.

Ragolution