James Roll

[James0roll_]

James Roll

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     James Roll waked up in a empty bomb shelter of no memory besides general knowledge and his name. The bomb shelter seemed very old, and was very small. He walked around trying to figure out where to go. He walked into many circles before encountering the first enemy. He saw a feral ghoul, pulling his fists out and hitting it tell it was on the ground dead with blood pouring out. He found a 10mm pistol in a ammo box along with 30, 10mm rounds.
     After exploring the bomb shelter James made his way out. When he was out he noticed the vast wasteland, and began his journey to find his true calling....

[Ragolution]

James Roll

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     James Roll woke up in a empty bomb shelter with no memory besides a cache of essential knowledge and his own name. The bomb shelter seemed very old, and was very small. He wandered around trying to figure out where to go. He wandered in circles before encountering his first mutant. He caught sight of a feral ghoul, raised his fists and beat it to death, onto the ground where it lay with blood pouring out. He found a 10mm pistol in a ammo box it had, along with 30 10mm rounds and a Grammatic.
     After exploring the bomb shelter James made his way onto the surface. After he became used to the glare of the sun, he noticed the vast wasteland ahead of him, and began his journey to find his true calling....

Fixed.

[James0roll_]

I do not notice what you fixes, but oh well. I'm just trying to keep myself occupied by posting things on these forums.

[Ragolution]

I do not notice what you fixes, but oh well. I'm just trying to keep myself occupied by posting things on these forums.

Your grammar is awful.
Are you sure you're American?

I am, infact, not trolling.

[Paintcheck]

I do not notice what you fixes, but oh well. I'm just trying to keep myself occupied by posting things on these forums.

Your grammar is awful.
Are you sure you're American?

I am, infact, not trolling.

Maybe not but if he wants to post IC stories here that's his prerogative. If he doesn't ask for criticism don't give it.

[Ragolution]

I do not notice what you fixes, but oh well. I'm just trying to keep myself occupied by posting things on these forums.

Your grammar is awful.
Are you sure you're American?

I am, infact, not trolling.

Maybe not but if he wants to post IC stories here that's his prerogative. If he doesn't ask for criticism don't give it.

As I stated, I'm not trolling. I'm trying my hardest to be constructive and soft-handed.
You've noticed his language is really.. odd. Doubtlessly.

[James0roll_]

I usually type really fast so I don't catch all my mistakes. A lot of people don't even spell the word "You" right, at least I try to use good grammar, right? I am also 13, so I'm not some adult who doesn't know how to spell.

[Ragolution]

I usually type really fast so I don't catch all my mistakes. A lot of people don't even spell the word "You" right, at least I try to use good grammar, right? I am also 13, so I'm not some adult who doesn't know how to spell.

I shrug and say: "It's not that big of a deal, but when you're on a forum, you've got all the time you need."

But I understand, regardless. Profiles are kind-of-a-big-deal as far as grammar and such.

Certain people like Pink! and Myself take that to an extreme, I'd admit.

[Cutch]

Take your time and use correct grammar. I am 13 as well but I still know how to write in the English language correctly.

[James0roll_]

Take your time and use correct grammar. I am 13 as well but I still know how to write in the English language correctly.

Then thats good. Although a lot of people I know don't.

Story time, may I?

At my school we took these online tests for English. My teacher YELLED at the class for making "I" like "i" and "you" like "u", so pretty much a lot of people I know can't use correct grammar, especially newer people that join the server. I use correct grammar by instinct of using computers all the time. Unless I do not press "Shift" for my "I", my hands actually numb up for like a millisecond, therefore letting me notice the fail grammar. I do look at the screen when typing though so if I know I screwed up I fix it, sometimes I past by it if my hands don't numb up long enough for me.

It's not that I don't do it on purpose, I just don't fully know how to use correct grammar, although I know a good bit, enough a teenager should.

[Ragolution]

The only reason I brought it up was because you had the chunk-grammar of a foreignly-fluent person.

Haha.

Sorry.

[Paintcheck]

Well that went off topic fast. Locked before flame war.